Aug. 22, 2022
Dissatisfaction and progress
Throughout history there has always been motivation for the improvement of mankind. Certain people consider that humans are motivated only by their surviving instinct. While other individuals think that mankind thrives because of certain feelings, such as satisfaction. I definitely agree with the fact that dissatisfaction leads to progress.
First of all, a person improves their life only when they are not satisfied. There are many examples which support this statement. Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the best footballers of all time, has succeeded thanks to his hard work and his insatiable hunger for improvement - which comes from dissatisfaction -. Moreover, Robert Kiyosaki, a somewhat known entrepreneur, has made millions of dollars because he was not satisfied with his life and he wanted to become as wealthy as his rich father.
Secondly, not only is dissatisfaction a personal feeling, but also a social feeling. In ancient times, most civilizations thrived because they were not satisfied with the power they already had. Roma and Greece are great examples of this. Thus, the progress of these civilizations was only possible because of dissatisfaction.
Lastly, dissatisfaction is the feeling that makes the whole world go forward. Tesla is making considerable progress on renewables energies. Other companies, such as SpaceX and Nasa, are working on spaceships which will allow humans to visit many different planets. Starlink is making huge strides towards a world were a wifi network is available everywhere. Elon Musk, the owner of these companies, is not satisfied with the state of the world right now, that is the reason he is trying to build a better world for everyone.
In conclusion, progress is directly caused by lack of satisfaction. Personal improvement occurs when a person is not comfortable with their life. Furthermore, dissatisfaction made ancient civilizations thrive. Now, society as a whole wants to improve because they are not satisfied with the world as it is.
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Throughout history there has always been motivation for theto improvement of mankind.
Alt: History has always centered on the improvement of mankind.
Certain peoplSome consider that humans are motivated only by their survivingal instinct.
While oOther individuals think that mankind thrives because of certain feelings, such as satisfaction.
Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the best footballers of all time, has succeeded thanks to his hard work and his insatiable hunger for improvement - both of which comes from dissatisfaction -.
Moreover, Robert Kiyosaki, a somewhat well-known entrepreneur, has made millions of dollars because he was not satisfied with his life and he wanted to become as wealthy as his rich father.
Secondly, not only is dissatisfaction a personal feeling, butit is also a social feeling.
Romae and Greece are great examples of this.
Tesla is making considerable progress on renewables energiesy.
Other companieorganizations, such as SpaceX and NasaASA, are working on spaceships which will allow humans to visit many different planets.
Starlink is making huge strides towards a world where a wifWiFi network is available everywhere.
Elon Musk, the owner of these companies, is not satisfied with the state of the world right now, t. (That is the reason/for this reason,) he is trying to build a better world for everyone.
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Well written - just minor corrections/suggestions.
Dissatisfaction and pProgress
Throughout history there has always been motivation for the improvement of mankind.
Certain people consider that humans arto be motivated only by their surviving instinct.
I definitely agree with the fact that dissatisfaction leads to progress.
First of all, a person improves their life only when they are not satisfied.
There are many examples which support this statement.
Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the best footballers of all time, has succeeded thanks to his hard work and his insatiable hunger for improvement -- which comes from dissatisfaction -.
Moreover, Robert Kiyosaki, a somewhat known entrepreneur, has made millions of dollars because he was not satisfied with his life and he wanted to become as wealthy as his rich father.
In ancient times, most civilizations thrived because they were not satisfied with the power they already had.
Romae and Greece are great examples of this.
Thus, the progress of these civilizations was only possible because of dissatisfaction.
Lastly, dissatisfaction is the feeling that makes the whole world go forward.
Tesla is making considerable progress on renewables energiesy.
Renewable energy is usually a singular uncountable noun, though it could work here (e.g. The renewable energies of wind, solar, and hydro power). Regardless it's quite rare to see it pluralized.
Other companies, such as SpaceX and NasaASA, are working on spaceships which will allow humans to visit many different planets.
Nitpick: NASA is an acronym... and a US government agency :)
Starlink is making huge strides towards a world were a wifWiFi network is available everywhere.
I'm not sure if WiFi (originally from 'Wireless Fidelity') is the preferred case anymore, but I thought I'd mention it. It's so ubiquitous it might be considered normal to write it in lowercase.
Elon Musk, the owner of these companies, is not satisfied with the state of the world right now, that is the reason he is trying to build a better world for everyone.
In conclusion, progress is directly caused by lack of satisfaction.
Personal improvement occurs when a person is not comfortable with their life.
Furthermore, dissatisfaction made ancient civilizations thrive.
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Nice work!
Dissatisfaction and pProgress
Throughout history there has always been motivation for theto improvement of mankind upon what we have.
CertainSome people considerbelieve that humans are motivated only by their survivingal instinct.
While other individuals think that mankind thrives because of certain feelings, such as satisfaction.
I definitely agree with the fact that dissatisfaction leads to progress.
First of all, a person improves their life only when they are not satisfied.
There are many examples which support this statement.
Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the best footballers of all time, has succeeded thanks to his hard work and his insatiable hunger for improvement - which comes from dissatisfaction -.
Moreover, Robert Kiyosaki, a somewhat well-known entrepreneur, has made millions of dollars because he was not satisfied with his life and he wanted to become as wealthy as his rich father.
Secondly, not only is dissatisfaction a personal feeling, but it's also a social feeling.
In ancient times, most civilizations thrived because they were not satisfied with the power they already had.
Romae and Greece are great examples of this.
Thus, the progress of these civilizations was only possible because of dissatisfaction.
Lastly, dissatisfaction is the feeling that makes the whole world go forward.
Tesla is making considerable progress on renewables energies.
Other companentities, such as SpaceX and NasaASA, are working on spaceships which will allow humans to visit many different planets.
NASA isn't a company. It's a government agency.
Starlink is making huge strides towards a world where a wifi network is available everywhere.
Elon Musk, the owner of these companiesTesla and SpaceX, is not satisfied with the state of the world right now,: that is the reason he is trying to build a better world for everyone.
Elon Musk doesn't own NASA.
In conclusion, progress is directly caused by lack of satisfaction.
Personal improvement occurs when a person is not comfortable with their life.
Furthermore, dissatisfaction made ancient civilizations thrive.
Now, society as a whole wants to improve because they are not satisfied with the world as it is.
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Nice work!
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