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Carol_Jia

Sept. 4, 2022

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Disney films

I think Disney films are pretty good. I can’t deny that I am still not an adult yet. I do think Disney films are awesome. But there are tons of adults that love these films too. Why? I think the films are not only for kids. For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca. I can tell that someone will never accept sea monsters, but some will. Giulia is one of the kind group of people. And the film shows Luca’s great spirit. He has his own ideas and can tell the difference between danger and fun. I am not trying to say kids are dumb or stupid. But can they really understand those things that I have mentioned? At least, kids who are below ten can’t, I think.

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I can’t deny that I am still not an adult yet., and

I do think Disney films are awesome.

For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca.

I can tell that someon people will never accept sea monsters, but some will.

Giulia is one of these kind group of people.

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Very nice!

I can't deny that I a'm still not an adult yetyoung.

But there are tons of adults that love these films, too.

I think the films are not onlyn't just for kids.

To sound more natural

Giulia is one of the kind group of people.

He has his own ideas, and he can tell the difference between danger and fun.

I a'm not trying to say kids are dumb or stupid.

To sound more natural

But can they really understand those things that I have mentionedese concepts?

To sound more natural

At least, kids who are below ten can’t, I thinkI think kids under ten can't.

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Great work!

Disney fFilms

I think Disney films are pretty good.

I can’t deny that I am still not an adult yet.

I do think Disney films are awesome.

But there are tons of adults that love these films too.

Why?

I think the films are not only for kids.

For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca.

I can tell that someone will never accept sea monsters, but some will.

Giulia is one of the kind groups of people.

And the film shows Luca’s great spirit.

He has his own ideas, and can tell the difference between danger and fun.

I am not trying to say kids are dumb or stupid.

But can they really understand those things that I have mentioned?

At least, kids who are below ten can’t, I think.

Disney films

I think Disney films are pretty good.

I can’t deny that I am still not an adult yet.

This is 'correct' but the double negative is a little confusing - perhaps 'It's true that I am still not an adult.'

I do think Disney films are awesome.

But there are tons of adults that love these films too.

Why?

I think the films are not only for kids.

For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca.

I can tell that someone will never accept sea monsters, but some will.

I'm not sure about the word 'accept' here which is a bit unclear - perhaps 'will never like' or 'will never enjoy watching'?

Giulia is one of the kind group of people.

The meaning is a little unclear - 'Giulia is a kind person'? If you let me know what you were trying to convey, I'll give a more helpful correction :)

And the film shows Luca’s great spirit.

He has his own ideas and can tell the difference between danger and fun.

I am not trying to say kids are dumb or stupid.

But can they really understand those things that I have mentioned?

At least, kids who are below ten can’t, I think.

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Nice work! I also enjoy Disney films - I like the more 'old school' ones like The Hunchback of Notre Dame and Beauty and the Beast. Do you have a favourite Disney film?

Disney films

I think Disney films are pretty good.

I can’t deny that I am stillam not an adult yet.

I do think Disney films are awesome.

But there are tons of adults that love these films too.

Why?

I think the films are not only for kids.

For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca.

"For an example" is not used.

I can tellknow that someon people will never accept sea monsters, but some will.

Giulia is a one of the kind group of peopleperson.

And the film shows Luca’s great spirit.

He has his own ideas and can tell the difference between danger and fun.

I am not trying to say that kids are dumb or stupid.

But can they really understand those things that I have mentionedsorts of things?

At least, kids who are belowyounger than ten can’t, I think.

Disney films


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Disney fFilms

I think Disney films are pretty good.


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I can’t deny that I am still not an adult yet.


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I can’t deny that I am stillam not an adult yet.

I can’t deny that I am still not an adult yet.

This is 'correct' but the double negative is a little confusing - perhaps 'It's true that I am still not an adult.'

I can't deny that I a'm still not an adult yetyoung.

I can’t deny that I am still not an adult yet., and

I do think Disney films are awesome.


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I do think Disney films are awesome.

But there are tons of adults that love these films too.


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But there are tons of adults that love these films, too.

Why?


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I think the films are not only for kids.


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I think the films are not onlyn't just for kids.

To sound more natural

For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca.


For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca.

"For an example" is not used.

For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca.

For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca.

For an example, the film about sea monsters, Luca.

I can tell that someone will never accept sea monsters, but some will.


I can tellknow that someon people will never accept sea monsters, but some will.

I can tell that someone will never accept sea monsters, but some will.

I'm not sure about the word 'accept' here which is a bit unclear - perhaps 'will never like' or 'will never enjoy watching'?

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I can tell that someon people will never accept sea monsters, but some will.

Giulia is one of the kind group of people.


Giulia is a one of the kind group of peopleperson.

Giulia is one of the kind group of people.

The meaning is a little unclear - 'Giulia is a kind person'? If you let me know what you were trying to convey, I'll give a more helpful correction :)

Giulia is one of the kind groups of people.

Giulia is one of the kind group of people.

Giulia is one of these kind group of people.

And the film shows Luca’s great spirit.


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He has his own ideas and can tell the difference between danger and fun.


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He has his own ideas, and can tell the difference between danger and fun.

He has his own ideas, and he can tell the difference between danger and fun.

I am not trying to say kids are dumb or stupid.


I am not trying to say that kids are dumb or stupid.

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I a'm not trying to say kids are dumb or stupid.

To sound more natural

But can they really understand those things that I have mentioned?


But can they really understand those things that I have mentionedsorts of things?

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But can they really understand those things that I have mentionedese concepts?

To sound more natural

At least, kids who are below ten can’t, I think.


At least, kids who are belowyounger than ten can’t, I think.

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At least, kids who are below ten can’t, I thinkI think kids under ten can't.

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