Dec. 10, 2020
Discipline
Early this year when I start the new job.
I feel completely loss. (Maybe even now I still loss)
The job isn’t busy at all.
In fact is too “not busy”.
I got so many free time.
But I just don’t know how to use the extra free time properly.
Someday I will watch Netflix the whole day.
Someday I will read a book and do nothing.
Someday I may keep on exercise.
From now on I will start write down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
Just one week ahead.
I want my future life become more discipline.
Earlyier this year when I start theed my new job.
I feelt completely losst.
(Maybe even now I still losst)
In fact, it's too “not busy”.
I gothave so manyuch free time.
Somedays I will watch Netflix the whole day.
Somedays I will read a book and do nothing.
Somedays I maytry to keep on exerciseing.
From now on I will start writeing down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
I want my future life to become more disciplined.
Feedback
Great job overall, you clearly delivered the message. Minor spelling and grammar errors, but you are improving! I hope things become better for you soon. Good luck!
Dec. 11, 2020
thanks
I feel completely losst.
(Maybe even now, I am still losst)
In fact, it is too “not busy”.
I gothave so manyuch free time.
Some days I will watch Netflix for the whole day.
Some days I will read a book and do nothing.
Some days I may keep on exerciseing.
From now on I will start writeing down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
I want my future life become more disciplined.
Discipline
Earlyier this year, when I start theed my new job.,
I feelt completely losst.
(Maybe even nowIt could even be said that to this day, I still feel losst)
The job isn’t busy at all.
In fact, it's too “not busy”.
I've got so manyuch free time.
But I just don’t know how to use the extra free time properly.
SOn some days, I will watch Netflix the whole dayall day long.
SOn some days, I will read a book and do nothing.
SOn some days, I may keep onight exercise.
From now on I will start write downmaking a list of “things to do”"TODO"s in my calendar.,
or "a list of things to do" is fine too
Jjust onfor the the week ahead.
I want my future life become more disciplined.
Feedback
Your sentences were very clear and legible overall! However, I did notice that a lot of your sentences are sentence fragments (the sentences whose periods I changed to commas). Perhaps work on that for next time? Keep up the good work!
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Someday I will watch Netflix the whole day.
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Someday I will read a book and do nothing.
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Someday I may keep on exercise.
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