Aug. 28, 2022
Digital detox
I use my phone and computer almost every day and I think I have never done a digital detox before.
Some days I go outside my house so I don't use any electronic device.
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I use my phone and computer almost every day and I. I don’t think I have never done a digital detox before.
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Some days I go outside my house so I don'as to not use any electronic device.
No need to say ‘my house’, as the expression ‘I/she/he goes outside’ implies exiting a place/going out into nature.
I’ve said ‘as to not use’ here because this expression < it is very formal. The way you write is very formal, thus I am keeping it consistent.
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It is always good to take breaks away from our screens and reacquaint one’s self with nature. Keep writing!
I use my phone and computer almost every day, and I think I have never done a digital detox before.
Some days, I go outside my house, so I don't use any electronic devices.
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I use my phone and computer almost every day and I think I have never done a digital detox before. I use my phone and computer almost every day, and I think I have never done a digital detox before. I use my phone and computer almost every day Natural |
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Some days I go outside my house so I don't use any electronic device. Some days, I go outside my house, so I don't use any electronic devices. Some days I go outside No need to say ‘my house’, as the expression ‘I/she/he goes outside’ implies exiting a place/going out into nature. I’ve said ‘as to not use’ here because this expression < it is very formal. The way you write is very formal, thus I am keeping it consistent. |
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