Oct. 14, 2024
Difficulties
Things have changed in my industry.
I've been working in China's domestic e-commerce industry for more than 16 years. Recently, I have felt some difficulties in this industry and our team has argued a lot about the future.
But I think there are pros and cons to this situation.
It's time for me to practice, maybe I can talk about some details tomorrow.
我所处的行业发生了诸多变化。
我在中国国内电子商务行业工作了16年多。最近，我感受到了这个行业的一些困难，我们的团队对未来有很多争论。
但我认为这种情况有利有弊。
锻炼的时间到了，也许明天我可以谈谈细节。
I've been working in China's domestic e-commerce industry for more than 16 years.
Recently, I have felt some difficulties within thise industry and ourmy team has argued a lot about the future.
Nov. 4, 2024
再次感谢！
I've been working in China's domestic e-commerce industry for more than 16 years.
"For over 16 years" feels a bit more natural to me, but what you've written is OK
Recently, I have felt some difficulties in this industry and our team has argued a lot about the future.
You could also say something like: "I've been feeling uneasy about the health/future of this industry"
It's time for me to practice, maybe I can talk about some details tomorrow.
This is grammatically correct, but it feels very sudden. Since you've just said "there are some pros and cons", I am expecting that you will list these pros and cons.
I would instead say something like: "I don't have time to talk about them today, but maybe tomorrow I can [talk about some of the details]/[elaborate a bit]."
Feedback
Grammatically perfect! Just a few small stylistic things
Oct. 15, 2024
Thank you so much! I learned a lot from your feedback.
Have a nice day!
Difficulties
Things have changed in my industry.
I've been working in China's domestic e-commerce industry for more than 16 years.
Recently, I have feltwent through some difficulties in this industry and our team has argued a lot aboutover the future.
”felt some difficulties” is a little unnatural here.
But I think there are pros and cons to this situation.
This is good, but “Pros and cons” is less often used for this kind of thing. I think a good alternative would be “Ups and downs”.
It's time for me to practice, maybe I can talk about someit in details tomorrow.
Oct. 15, 2024
Thank you so much! I learned a lot from your feedback and corrections.
Have a nice day!
Difficulties
Things have changed in my industry.
I've been working in China's domestic e-commerce industry for more than 16 years.
Recently, I have felt some difficulties in this industry and our team has argued a lot aboutover the future.
"About" is correct, "over" is more natural.
But I think there are pros and cons to this situation.
It's time for me to practice, maybe I can talk about some details tomorrow.
Feedback
Nice work!
Oct. 15, 2024
Thank you so much! I learned a lot from your feedback and correction.
Have a nice day!
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But I think there are pros and cons to this situation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But I think there are pros and cons to this situation. This is good, but “Pros and cons” is less often used for this kind of thing. I think a good alternative would be “Ups and downs”. |
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It's time for me to practice, maybe I can talk about some details tomorrow. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It's time for me to practice, maybe I can talk about It's time for me to practice, maybe I can talk about some details tomorrow. This is grammatically correct, but it feels very sudden. Since you've just said "there are some pros and cons", I am expecting that you will list these pros and cons. I would instead say something like: "I don't have time to talk about them today, but maybe tomorrow I can [talk about some of the details]/[elaborate a bit]." |
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