April 11, 2022
Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities to Germany are available now, anyone who wants to should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions:First,have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year;second,college or above. I submited the request immediately and I passed the screening,but my parents donot consent to me working abroad, what should I do next?
Difficult choice
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I submitted thea request immediately and I passed the screening, but my parents do not consent to me working abroad, w. What should I do next?
Difficult choice
Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities to Germany are available now, and that anyone who wants to should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions: First, you need to have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year; second, you need to be college or above.
I submited the request immediately and I passed the screening, but my parents do not consent to me working abroad, w. What should I do next?
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Overall very well written
Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities toin Germany are available now, a. Anyone who wants to should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions :First, have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year; second, have college level or above qualifications.
I submitted the request immediately and I passed the screening, but my parents dono't consent to me working abroad,. what should I do next?
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Your English is good, most of your mistakes are punctuation errors. Your composition is good and your thoughts are well linked together.
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I submited the request immediately and I passed the screening,but my parents do not consent to me working abroad, what should I do next?
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