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April 11, 2022

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Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities to Germany are available now, anyone who wants to should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions:First,have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year;second,college or above. I submited the request immediately and I passed the screening,but my parents donot consent to me working abroad, what should I do next?

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Difficult choice

Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities toin Germany are available now,. aAnyone who wants to should submit thea request first and should meet the following conditions: First, have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year; second,college or above have a college degree or higher qualification.

I submitted thea request immediately and I passed the screening, but my parents do not consent to me working abroad, w. What should I do next?

Difficult choice

Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities to Germany are available now, and that anyone who wants to should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions: First, you need to have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year; second, you need to be college or above.

I submited the request immediately and I passed the screening, but my parents do not consent to me working abroad, w. What should I do next?

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Overall very well written

Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities toin Germany are available now, a. Anyone who wants to should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions :First, have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year; second, have college level or above qualifications.

I submitted the request immediately and I passed the screening, but my parents dono't consent to me working abroad,. what should I do next?

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Your English is good, most of your mistakes are punctuation errors. Your composition is good and your thoughts are well linked together.

Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities toin Germany are available now, a. Anyone who wants tois interested should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions:
First, have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year;second,college or above.

Just an alternative way to say it (sounds nicer)

I submited the request immediately and I passed the screening,but my parents do not consent to me working abroad, what should I do next?

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Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities to Germany are available now, anyone who wants to should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions:First,have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year;second,college or above.


Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities toin Germany are available now, a. Anyone who wants tois interested should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions:
First, have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year;second,college or above.

Just an alternative way to say it (sounds nicer)

Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities toin Germany are available now, a. Anyone who wants to should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions :First, have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year; second, have college level or above qualifications.

Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities to Germany are available now, and that anyone who wants to should submit the request first and should meet the following conditions: First, you need to have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year; second, you need to be college or above.

Recently, my colleagues and I received a message from our firm that job opportunities toin Germany are available now,. aAnyone who wants to should submit thea request first and should meet the following conditions: First, have worked at the company headquarters for at least one year; second,college or above have a college degree or higher qualification.

I submited the request immediately and I passed the screening,but my parents donot consent to me working abroad, what should I do next?


I submited the request immediately and I passed the screening,but my parents do not consent to me working abroad, what should I do next?

I submitted the request immediately and I passed the screening, but my parents dono't consent to me working abroad,. what should I do next?

I submited the request immediately and I passed the screening, but my parents do not consent to me working abroad, w. What should I do next?

I submitted thea request immediately and I passed the screening, but my parents do not consent to me working abroad, w. What should I do next?

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