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Différent ways to live 100 years
Indeed, every body wants to live the most they can. And they are different acrivities like exercise, diet and keeping active. Moreover, there are a lot of advance in moderne science and now, it's more common to become a centenarian. One of the most important thing is the relationship you have with other peoples. But, if you aren't sociable you can also have only 1 or 2 friends or just have pets and it's work too. One size doesn't fit all. But, some people wants radical treatments. So, a doctor is involving different treatments. The first is called the Fontaine of Youth: it makes the old peoples younger. And the second is the Peter Pan treatment, in reference with the movie. It's a treatment you can take every year or every few month and it makes you get older more slowly.
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Difféerent ways to live a 100 years
And theyre are different acrtivities like exercise, diet and keeping active.
nice try, slight spelling mistake but that's normal. They is used for a group of people or one ungendered person, there can be used (among other things) for a group of things
Moreover, there are a lot of advance in moderne science and now, it's more common to become a centenarian.
But, if you aren't sociable you can also have only 1 or 2 friends or just have pets and it's work's too.
But, some people wants radical treatments.
So, a doctor is involvinges different treatments.
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this was great! A few times with 's it was in the wrong place, but it is a difficult concept to understand
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Thanks a lot for your correction !
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The first is called the Fontaine of Youth: it makes the old peoples younger. |
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And the second is the Peter Pan treatment, in reference with the movie. |
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It's a treatment you can take every year or every few month and it makes you get older more slowly. |
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Thanks for reading ! |
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Différent ways to live 100 years Diff |
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Indeed, every body wants to live the most they can. |
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And they are different acrivities like exercise, diet and keeping active. And the nice try, slight spelling mistake but that's normal. They is used for a group of people or one ungendered person, there can be used (among other things) for a group of things |
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Moreover, there are a lot of advance in moderne science and now, it's more common to become a centenarian. Moreover, there are a lot of advance in modern |
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One of the most important thing is the relationship you have with other peoples. |
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But, if you aren't sociable you can also have only 1 or 2 friends or just have pets and it's work too. But, if you aren't sociable you can also have only 1 or 2 friends or just have pets and it |
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One size doesn't fit all. |
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But, some people wants radical treatments. But, some people want |
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So, a doctor is involving different treatments. So, a doctor |
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