Oct. 19, 2020
I've been on a diet since Friday. It's the third or fourth time I've done it. My mom started doing it after one of my cousins recommended it to her. It's very strict. You can only eat vegetables and fruits, and he only sources of protein are eggs that you collect yourself and soy. You cannot eat sugar or oil, and the amount of salt that you can ingested is limited. You have to keep this diet for a week and, you have to fast on the last 36 hours. Since it's a very strict diet, it can only be done once a month. My mom did this for two months by herself, but on the third month I decided that I'd join her because she always gets more motivated if someone helps her with diet and exercise related stuff.
Since I'm not overweight, my mom says that I must not follow the diet so strictly because it could make me sick and weak, so I use it as an opportunity to do a monthly "cleanse". Just like the diet instructs, I only eat fruits and vegetables, but I also include chicken breasts, tuna, and the eggs I buy at the market. The first time I did this it was really difficult. I love eating candies, and we always have dessert after our meals here in my house so it always seemed like something was missing after I finished eating.
Nowadays, though, I've become used to it. I discovered new recipes of desserts that don't use sugar, and I bought one of those non-stick frying pans so I can fry eggs without adding oil. These weeks have proven to be an excellent opportunity for me to try new healthy recipes and now I always look forward to the "diet week" of the month. Last night I made a soup with vegetables and thin slices of chicken breast, and, as a side dish, crispy beet slices baked on the oven. It was really delicious.
You can only eat vegetables and fruits, and the only sources of protein are eggs that you collect yourself and soy.
You cannot eat sugar or oil, and the amount of salt that you can ingested is limited.
You have to keep this diet for a week and, you have to fast on the last 36 hours.
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It's the third or fourth time I've donethat I'm doing it.
My mom started doingdid it after one of my cousins recommended it to her.
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You can only eat vegetables and fruits, and the only sources of protein are eggs that you collect yourself and soy.
you could say something like soybeans, or products made from soybeans.
You cannot eat sugar or oil, and the amount of salt that you can ingestedsalt intake is limited.
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Since it's a very strict diet, it can only be done once a month.
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When you use a demonstrative pronoun such as "these weeks", I'm not sure which weeks you are referring to. I've added "past", so hopefully this is what you meant to say.
Last night, I made a soup with vegetables and thin slices of chicken breast, and, as a side dish, crispy beet slices baked oin the oven.
It was really delicious.
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I've been on a diet since Friday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's the third or fourth time I've done it. It's the third or fourth time |
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My mom started doing it after one of my cousins recommended it to her. My mom |
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It's very strict.
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You can only eat vegetables and fruits, and he only sources of protein are eggs that you collect yourself and soy. You can only eat vegetables and fruits, and the only sources of protein are eggs that you collect yourself and soy. you could say something like soybeans, or products made from soybeans. You can only eat vegetables and fruits, and the only sources of protein are eggs that you collect yourself and soy. |
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You cannot eat sugar or oil, and the amount of salt that you can ingested is limited. You cannot eat sugar or oil, and the You cannot eat sugar or oil, and the amount of salt that you can ingest |
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You have to keep this diet for a week and, you have to fast on the last 36 hours. You have to You have to keep this diet for a week and |
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Since it's a very strict diet, it can only be done once a month. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My mom did this for two months by herself, but on the third month I decided that I'd join her because she always gets more motivated if someone helps her with diet and exercise related stuff. My mom did it |
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Since I'm not overweight, my mom says that I must not follow the diet so strictly because it could make me sick and weak, so I use it as an opportunity to do a monthly "cleanse". Since I'm not overweight, my mom says that I |
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Just like the diet instructs, I only eat fruits and vegetables, but I also include chicken breasts, tuna, and the eggs I buy at the market.
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The first time I did this it was really difficult. The first time I I'm going to combine your two sentences together. |
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I love eating candies, and we always have dessert after our meals here in my house so it always seemed like something was missing after I finished eating. .... I love eating candies, and at home we always have dessert after our meals |
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Nowadays, though, I've become used to it.
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I discovered new recipes of desserts that don't use sugar, and I bought one of those non-stick frying pans so I can fry eggs without adding oil. I discovered new In the dessert recipe, you have to fry eggs? |
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These weeks have proven to be an excellent opportunity for me to try new healthy recipes and now I always look forward to the "diet week" of the month. These past weeks have When you use a demonstrative pronoun such as "these weeks", I'm not sure which weeks you are referring to. I've added "past", so hopefully this is what you meant to say. |
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Last night I made a soup with vegetables and thin slices of chicken breast, and, as a side dish, crispy beet slices baked on the oven. Last night, I made a soup with vegetables and thin slices of chicken breast, and, as a side dish, crispy beet slices baked |
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It was really delicious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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