Nov. 16, 2024
Didn't get a job due to poor English writing
For a long period, I have been looking for a job, but even if I get a chance, I get rejected due to my poor English speaking or writing skills. It's quite a frustrating experience especially when you are desperate to earn money and lose the opportunity due to your incompetency or lack of English fluency. So I thought, let's find a solution, and I found this platform to write something every day in English and get feedback from native speakers. The job market is full of competition; money is scarce in the world. Not everyone is capable enough and lucky enough to work hard and get rich. At this moment in my life, making money seems very difficult. Poverty sucks!! It takes your happiness and life away from you. And all you have is struggles and the bullshit Idea "hard work gets you the shit you want!!" "Your time will come someday." It's so stupid! If you are poor, stupid, and unlucky, you are not gonna get anything. And when you say life is unfair. Some people gonna tell you it's just you are lazy and just work hard and be consistent and everything will be fine. In some cases, it could be true for some. But we don't share the same reality. Not everyone is capable of working very hard and staying focused for a long time. I am a very pessimistic, antisocial, and hopeless guy. Couldn't come up with anything better for the first post here. Words from the individuals reflect the reality they experience or are capable of perceiving as such. I thought to delete what I wrote because it doesn't sound good. But who cares what I think or do?
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Nothing you wrote here is inherently wrong, I just think this might flow better/sound a bit better.
It's quite a frustrating experience especially when you are desperate to earn money and lose the opportunity due to your incompetency or lack of English fluency.
So I thought, let's fidecided to finally try and ado solutionmething about this, and I found this platform towhere I can write something every day in English and get feedback from native speakers.
Just changing some wording here.
Not everyone is capable enough andor lucky enough to work hard and get rich.
And all you have isare struggles and the bullshit Iidea "hard work gets you the shit you want!!"
And when you say life is unfair, some people are always going to tell you you're just lazy and if you just work hard and stay consistent everything will be fine.
There should not be a period here. The two sentences should combine.
Some people gonna tell you it's just you are lazy and just work hard and be consistent and everything will be fine.
So yeah because you should combine these sentences, this one now goes away.
Couldn't come up with anything better for themy first post here.
Words from the individuals reflect the reality they experience or are capable of perceiving as such.
Not really sure what this is supposed to mean.
I thought abouto deleteing what I wrote because it doesn't sound good.
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Your English is actually very good. I'm not necessarily correcting much more as just offering alternative ways of saying things that I personally believe to be a little bit more elegant. Hopefully it helps you out :D
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For a long period of time, I have been looking for a job, but even if I get a chanceinvited for an interview, I get rejected due to my poor English speaking or writing skills.
It's quite a frustrating experience especially when you are desperate to earn money and lose the opportunity due to your incompetency or lack of English fluency.
So I thought, let's me find a solution, and I found this platform to. Here, I can write something every day in English and get feedback from native speakers.
The job market is full of competition; and money is scarce in the worldnot easy to earn.
Not everyone is capable enough and lucky enough to work hard and get rich.
At this moment in my life, making money seems very difficult.
Poverty sucks!!
It takes your happiness and life away from you.
And all you have is struggles and the bullshit Iidea "hard work gets you the shit you want!!"
Well, hard work is part of it.
"Your time will come someday."
It's so stupid!
But true.
If you are poor, stupid, and unlucky, you are not gonnaing to get anything.
This is more formal.
And when you say life is unfair.,
Ssome people gonnaare going to tell you it's justhat you are lazy and, just work hard and, be consistent and everything will be fine.
But we don't share the same reality.are not the same.
Not everyone is capable of working very hard and staying focused for a long time.
I am a very pessimistic, antisocial, and hopeless guy.
CI couldn't come up with anything better for the first post here.
I thought abouto deleteing what I wrote because it doesn't sound good.
But who cares about what I think or do?
Feedback
Welcome 👋🏽, I hope you have a great time here 😃. If you need ideas about what to write, on the topmost part of the homepage, there is a section called Prompts, there you can find what you can write about, you can even post prompts there too for others.
I hope writing this made you feel better.
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Not everyone is capable enough and lucky enough to work hard and get rich. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Not everyone is capable |
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Didn't get a job due to poor English writing I Didn't |
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For a long period, I have been looking for a job, but even if I get a chance, I get rejected due to my poor English speaking or writing skills. For a long period of time, I have been looking for a job, but even if I get For a long Nothing you wrote here is inherently wrong, I just think this might flow better/sound a bit better. |
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It's quite a frustrating experience especially when you are desperate to earn money and lose the opportunity due to your incompetency or lack of English fluency. It's quite a frustrating experience especially when you are desperate to earn money and lose the opportunity due It's quite a frustrating experience especially when you are desperate to earn money and lose the opportunity due to your incompetency or lack of English fluency. |
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So I thought, let's find a solution, and I found this platform to write something every day in English and get feedback from native speakers. So I thought, let So I Just changing some wording here. |
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The job market is full of competition; money is scarce in the world. The job market is full of competition |
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At this moment in my life, making money seems very difficult. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Poverty sucks!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It takes your happiness and life away from you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And all you have is struggles and the bullshit Idea "hard work gets you the shit you want!!" And all you have is struggles and the bullshit Well, hard work is part of it. And all you have |
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"Your time will come someday." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's so stupid! It's so stupid! But true. |
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If you are poor, stupid, and unlucky, you are not gonna get anything. If you are poor, stupid, and unlucky, you are not go This is more formal. |
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And when you say life is unfair. And when you say life is unfair And when you say life is unfair, some people are always going to tell you you're just lazy and if you just work hard and stay consistent everything will be fine. There should not be a period here. The two sentences should combine. |
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Some people gonna tell you it's just you are lazy and just work hard and be consistent and everything will be fine.
So yeah because you should combine these sentences, this one now goes away. |
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In some cases, it could be true for some. |
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But we don't share the same reality. But we |
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Not everyone is capable of working very hard and staying focused for a long time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am a very pessimistic, antisocial, and hopeless guy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Couldn't come up with anything better for the first post here.
Couldn't come up with anything better for |
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Words from the individuals reflect the reality they experience or are capable of perceiving as such. Words from the individuals reflect the reality they experience or are capable of perceiving as such. Not really sure what this is supposed to mean. |
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I thought to delete what I wrote because it doesn't sound good. I thought about I thought about |
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But who cares what I think or do? But who cares about what I think or do? |
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