yesterday
Did you sleep well last night?
Yes, I had a great deep night's sleep despite of short time. I wake up at 5 a.m these days in order to study English before going to work, so I inevitably don't sleep long time. I wish I can have a full night's sleep at New Year's day off.
Did you sleep well last night?
Yes, I had a great deep night's sleep despite ofit being short time.
Common phrases are "a great night's sleep", or "a deep sleep", but it doesn't sound right to combine them both together.
Also, you could use the phrase "despite it being a short amount of time" (but that's slightly less common than the correction I made).
I wake up at 5 a.m these days in order to study English before going to work, so I inevitably don't sleep a long time.
Equally alternatively:
"...so I inevitably don't sleep long."
I wish I can havehope to get a full night's sleep aton New Year's day off.
"I wish I can get" sounds like you want to get something, but you know "it will NEVER happen". Whereas, "I hope to get" sounds like you want to get it, but you "only think it is a POSSIBILITY".
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Great Job! I also wake up early to study Japanese before work! スキルアップを頑張りましょう！
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are frequently used vocabulary expressions that I wouldn't know unless a native speaker taught me, so this is very helpful for studying.
I still make a lot of mistakes, but I think the sentences are at a level where I can understand what I'm trying to say.
Did you sleep well last night?
Yes, I had a great deep night's sleep despite ofit being short time.
a great/good night's sleep is pretty much a phrase, adding extra adjectives to it sounds strange.
I wake up at 5 a.m these days in order to study English before going to work, so I inevitably I don't sleep for a long time.
inevitably sounds slightly better where I put it but your placement was also correct.
I wish I canould have a full night's sleep aton New Year's day off.
You need to use the subjunctive with I wish in this context. New Year's day already implies the day off.
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Good stuff, keep it up!
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are frequently used vocabulary expressions that I wouldn't know unless a native speaker taught me, so this is very helpful for studying.
I still make a lot of mistakes, but I think the sentences are at a level where I can understand what I'm trying to say.
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Yes, I had a great deep night's sleep despite of short time. Yes, I had a great a great/good night's sleep is pretty much a phrase, adding extra adjectives to it sounds strange. Yes, I had a great Common phrases are "a great night's sleep", or "a deep sleep", but it doesn't sound right to combine them both together. Also, you could use the phrase "despite it being a short amount of time" (but that's slightly less common than the correction I made). |
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I wake up at 5 a.m these days in order to study English before going to work, so I inevitably don't sleep long time. I wake up at 5 a.m these days in order to study English before going to work, so inevitably sounds slightly better where I put it but your placement was also correct. I wake up at 5 a.m these days in order to study English before going to work, so I inevitably don't sleep a long time. Equally alternatively: "...so I inevitably don't sleep long." |
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I wish I can have a full night's sleep at New Year's day off. I wish I c You need to use the subjunctive with I wish in this context. New Year's day already implies the day off. I "I wish I can get" sounds like you want to get something, but you know "it will NEVER happen". Whereas, "I hope to get" sounds like you want to get it, but you "only think it is a POSSIBILITY". |
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