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heyyawn

March 4, 2021

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Diary: School Starts

School started online on March 1, and we're going back to offline classes on March 12. To be honest, it sounds weird. Today I finally figured out why, it's because of the China's Two Sessions. Several VPNs suddenly don't work today, and it seems like the Great Fire Wall were getting higher again, which often means something big is happening in China. Sure enough, having sessions again. These sessions will run from March 4 to March 11, so it's no wonder classes run in such a strange way.

But the start of school did not bring me joy. I don't like the learning content in my major, some of them were very superficial, and some of the teachers were not very good academically. But before the final exam, these teachers would give us the key points of the exam. It's easy to pass the final exam by taking one day to recite these exam content. But what can students learn?

Facing the offline classes next week, I was also worried about the school lockdown due to the epidemic, which we had experienced last semester. School lockdown means that students are not allowed to leave the campus. In fact, I can't understand the need for this lockdown. The city where the school is located has only confirmed about 70 cases in total and now there are no more suspected cases. However, I need to work part-time in a hobby class at an elementary school. So I have to leave school, which means I may have to climb over the fence around the school again. :(

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Diary: School Starts

School started online on March 1, and we're going back to offline classes on March 12.

To be honest, it sounds weird.

Today I finally figured out why,: it's because of the China's Two Sessions.

Two independent clauses: need a colon.

Several VPNs suddenly don't work today, and it seems like the Great Fire Wall wereis getting higher again, which often means something big is happening in China.

Is getting higher right now: if it was in past tense, it would be "was getting"

Sure enough, we are having sessions again.

ALWAYS need a pronoun before a verb, and you need a helping verb

These sessions will run from March 4 to March 11, so it's no wonder these classes run in such a strange way.

Need "these" for clarification.

But the start of school did not bring me joy.

I don't like the learning content in my major, s. Some of them weare very superficial, and some of the teachers weare not very good academically.

Need a new sentence. Since you're talking about a current thing, use "are" instead of "were".

But before the final exam, these teachers would give us the key points of the exam.

No reason to have "but": not a conflicting statement.

It's easy to pass the final exam by taking one day to recite these exam content.

You need "the" instead of "these"

But what canwill students learn?

"will" shows exactly what you're talking about.

Facing the offline classes next week, I was also worried about the school lockdown due to the epidemic, which we had experienced last semester.

No reason for "the" or "had".

School lockdown means that students are not allowed to leave the campus.

In fact, I cadon't understand the need for this lockdown.

You could understand the need, you have the ability, but you don't because you disagree with it. Can=capability, don't=agreement

The city wherein which the school is located has only confirmed about 70 cases in total and now there are no more suspected cases.

use "in which" to indicate a specific place after a subject.

However, I need to work part-time in a hobby class at an elementary school.

So I have to leave school, which means I may have to climb over the fence around the school again.

:(

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actually this was a WILD ride bud. Hop the fence? good luck!!
good job!! :)

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heyyawn

March 6, 2021

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Thank you :)

Diary: School Starts


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School started online on March 1, and we're going back to offline classes on March 12.


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To be honest, it sounds weird.


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Today I finally figured out why, it's because of the China's Two Sessions.


Today I finally figured out why,: it's because of the China's Two Sessions.

Two independent clauses: need a colon.

Several VPNs suddenly don't work today, and it seems like the Great Fire Wall were getting higher again, which often means something big is happening in China.


Several VPNs suddenly don't work today, and it seems like the Great Fire Wall wereis getting higher again, which often means something big is happening in China.

Is getting higher right now: if it was in past tense, it would be "was getting"

Sure enough, having sessions again.


Sure enough, we are having sessions again.

ALWAYS need a pronoun before a verb, and you need a helping verb

These sessions will run from March 4 to March 11, so it's no wonder classes run in such a strange way.


These sessions will run from March 4 to March 11, so it's no wonder these classes run in such a strange way.

Need "these" for clarification.

But the start of school did not bring me joy.


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I don't like the learning content in my major, some of them were very superficial, and some of the teachers were not very good academically.


I don't like the learning content in my major, s. Some of them weare very superficial, and some of the teachers weare not very good academically.

Need a new sentence. Since you're talking about a current thing, use "are" instead of "were".

But before the final exam, these teachers would give us the key points of the exam.


But before the final exam, these teachers would give us the key points of the exam.

No reason to have "but": not a conflicting statement.

It's easy to pass the final exam by taking one day to recite these exam content.


It's easy to pass the final exam by taking one day to recite these exam content.

You need "the" instead of "these"

But what can students learn?


But what canwill students learn?

"will" shows exactly what you're talking about.

Facing the offline classes next week, I was also worried about the school lockdown due to the epidemic, which we had experienced last semester.


Facing the offline classes next week, I was also worried about the school lockdown due to the epidemic, which we had experienced last semester.

No reason for "the" or "had".

School lockdown means that students are not allowed to leave the campus.


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In fact, I can't understand the need for this lockdown.


In fact, I cadon't understand the need for this lockdown.

You could understand the need, you have the ability, but you don't because you disagree with it. Can=capability, don't=agreement

The city where the school is located has only confirmed about 70 cases in total and now there are no more suspected cases.


The city wherein which the school is located has only confirmed about 70 cases in total and now there are no more suspected cases.

use "in which" to indicate a specific place after a subject.

However, I need to work part-time in a hobby class at an elementary school.


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So I have to leave school, which means I may have to climb over the fence around the school again.


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