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April 5, 2025

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Diary of the day

I start to write diary in English from today for practice writing English.
Today, I washed my closes and bed covers in the morning.
I cooked spaghettini with mushroom for lunch.
In the afternoon, I went to a pottery class for the first time! That was too difficult to stand up clay tower and need strong power to do pottery!
But that was so much fun for me such a starting new thing!
After I was came back to my place I made dinner and watched a movie of the Pinocchio. Then that made me surprise there was Cynthia Erivo as a bule fairy!! I was just watched the Wicked last Wednesday! Her voice is amazing! I love her songs!


今日から英語の勉強のために英語で日記を書きます。
今日は午前中はシーツと服を洗濯しました。それからきのこのスパゲッティをお昼ごはんに作りました。
午後には初めて陶芸教室に行きました。ねんどをろくろ台の上で立ち上げるのがすごく難しくて、陶芸には強い力が必要だと思いました。でも、新しいことを始められて刺激的でとても楽しかったです。
家に帰ってきてからは夕飯を作りながら実写版のピノキオをみました。そしたらブルーフェアリー役がシンシアでとっても驚きました!なぜならちょうど水曜日にウィキッドの映画を見たばかりだったのです!私は彼女の歌声が大好きです!

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Diary entry of the day

I'll start to writeing diary entries in English from today foronwards to practice writing English. (or: as English writing practice.)

Todayhis morning, I washed my closthes and bed covers in the morning.

I cooked spaghettini with mushroom for lunch.

In the afternoon, I went to a pottery class for the first time!

ThaIt was too difficult to stand upkeep a clay tower andupright. You need stroeng powerth to do pottery!

But thait was so much fun for me such a startingto experience a new thing!

After I was camegot back to my place, I made dinner and watched a movie of thecalled Pinocchio.

Then that made me surprise there wasIt surprised me that Cynthia Erivo was a bulthere as the blue fairy!!

I washad just watched the Wicked last Wednesday!

Her voice is amazing!

I love her songs!

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Well done!

I sStarting today, I'm going to write a diary in English from today forto practice writing English.

Todayhis morning, I washed my closthes and bed covers in the morning.

Only using one time word is more natural than using "today" and "in the morning".

I cooked spaghettini with mushrooms for lunch.

In the afternoon, I went to a pottery class for the first time!

ThaIt was too difficult to stand up the clay tower and. You need stroeng powerth to do pottery!

But thait was so much fun for me such ato starting a new thing!

After, I was cameent back to my place I, made dinner, and watched athe movie of the "Pinocchio".

There are many Pinocchio movies, so maybe you'd want to specify which one. You could say "I watched the 2022 Pinocchio movie", perhaps.

Then that made meI was surprise there waso see Cynthia Erivo as a bulue fairy!!

I was just watched the Wicked last Wednesday!

You could combine these two sentences. It would make it more obvious why you were surprised:

"I was surprised to see Cynthia Eviro as a blue fairy, since I just watched Wicked last Wednesday!"

Her voice is amazing!

I love her songs!

These two sentences would also work well together:

"Her voice is amazing, I love her songs!

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Great work! Cynthia Eviro is amazing, I love "Defying Gravity". I didn't know she was in the new Pinocchio, I need to watch that movie.

I start to write a diary in English from today for practiceing writing English.

Today, I washed my closthes and bed covers in the morning.

English is hard! This is spelled differently than it is said.

I cooked spaghettini with mushroom for lunch.

In the afternoon, I went to a pottery class for the first time!

ThaIt was too difficult to stand up clay tower and neI needed strong power to do pottery!

But that was so much fun for me such ato starting a new thing!

After I was came back to my place I made dinner and watched a movie of the Pinocchio.

Then that made me surprised there was Cynthia Erivo as a bulue fairy!!

Just a little spelling mistake. No big problem

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Your main problem is the difference of there and it. Where it refers to an object, there refers to a place. For example, “It was really fun!”

Diary of the day

“Diary of the day” is OK, but “Today’s Diary Entry” would be more natural.

I am starting to write a diary in English from today for (or: to) practice writing English.

Today, I washed my closthes and bed covers in the morning.

I cooked spaghettini with mushrooms for lunch.

In the afternoon, I went to a pottery class for the first time!

ThaIt was too difficult to stand up(or: pull) up a clay tower and. You need stroeng powerth to do pottery!

It was too difficult to stand (or: pull) up a clay tower. You need strength to do pottery!

“Pull” is the verb for making the clay rise up from a spinning pottery wheel. We “pull” the clay up.

But thait was so much fun for me such a startingto start such a new thing!

alternative:
But starting such a new thing was so much fun for me!

After I was came back to my place I made dinner and watched athe movie of the Pinocchio.

Then that made me surprised that there was Cynthia Erivo as a bulue fairy!!

more natural:
I was surprised to see Cynthia Erivo as a blue fairy!!

I washad just watched the Wicked last Wednesday!

Her voice is amazing!

I love her songs!

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I used to do pottery about 20 years ago. It was a lot of fun. :-)

I cooked spaghettini with mushroom for lunch.


I cooked spaghettini with mushrooms for lunch.

I cooked spaghettini with mushroom for lunch.

I cooked spaghettini with mushrooms for lunch.

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In the afternoon, I went to a pottery class for the first time!


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That was too difficult to stand up clay tower and need strong power to do pottery!


ThaIt was too difficult to stand up(or: pull) up a clay tower and. You need stroeng powerth to do pottery!

It was too difficult to stand (or: pull) up a clay tower. You need strength to do pottery! “Pull” is the verb for making the clay rise up from a spinning pottery wheel. We “pull” the clay up.

ThaIt was too difficult to stand up clay tower and neI needed strong power to do pottery!

ThaIt was too difficult to stand up the clay tower and. You need stroeng powerth to do pottery!

ThaIt was too difficult to stand upkeep a clay tower andupright. You need stroeng powerth to do pottery!

Diary of the day


Diary of the day

“Diary of the day” is OK, but “Today’s Diary Entry” would be more natural.

Diary entry of the day

I start to write diary in English from today for practice writing English.


I am starting to write a diary in English from today for (or: to) practice writing English.

I start to write a diary in English from today for practiceing writing English.

I sStarting today, I'm going to write a diary in English from today forto practice writing English.

I'll start to writeing diary entries in English from today foronwards to practice writing English. (or: as English writing practice.)

Today, I washed my closes and bed covers in the morning.


Today, I washed my closthes and bed covers in the morning.

Today, I washed my closthes and bed covers in the morning.

English is hard! This is spelled differently than it is said.

Todayhis morning, I washed my closthes and bed covers in the morning.

Only using one time word is more natural than using "today" and "in the morning".

Todayhis morning, I washed my closthes and bed covers in the morning.

But that was so much fun for me such a starting new thing!


But thait was so much fun for me such a startingto start such a new thing!

alternative: But starting such a new thing was so much fun for me!

But that was so much fun for me such ato starting a new thing!

But thait was so much fun for me such ato starting a new thing!

But thait was so much fun for me such a startingto experience a new thing!

After I was came back to my place I made dinner and watched a movie of the Pinocchio.


After I was came back to my place I made dinner and watched athe movie of the Pinocchio.

After I was came back to my place I made dinner and watched a movie of the Pinocchio.

After, I was cameent back to my place I, made dinner, and watched athe movie of the "Pinocchio".

There are many Pinocchio movies, so maybe you'd want to specify which one. You could say "I watched the 2022 Pinocchio movie", perhaps.

After I was camegot back to my place, I made dinner and watched a movie of thecalled Pinocchio.

Then that made me surprise there was Cynthia Erivo as a bule fairy!!


Then that made me surprised that there was Cynthia Erivo as a bulue fairy!!

more natural: I was surprised to see Cynthia Erivo as a blue fairy!!

Then that made me surprised there was Cynthia Erivo as a bulue fairy!!

Just a little spelling mistake. No big problem

Then that made meI was surprise there waso see Cynthia Erivo as a bulue fairy!!

Then that made me surprise there wasIt surprised me that Cynthia Erivo was a bulthere as the blue fairy!!

I was just watched the Wicked last Wednesday!


I washad just watched the Wicked last Wednesday!

I was just watched the Wicked last Wednesday!

You could combine these two sentences. It would make it more obvious why you were surprised: "I was surprised to see Cynthia Eviro as a blue fairy, since I just watched Wicked last Wednesday!"

I washad just watched the Wicked last Wednesday!

Her voice is amazing!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love her songs!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love her songs!

These two sentences would also work well together: "Her voice is amazing, I love her songs!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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