Feb. 25, 2021
Diary: NEET
I read an article about NEET (Not engaged in Education,Employment or Training) a few days ago. NEET is more pessimistic about the future than ordinary people. The article said that there was a NEET because he was alone at home for a long time, and no one found his death for a long time. That's creepy...... I recently stayed at home alone for a month. Not for quarantine. It's just for winter vacation and I don't want to go out...... The article also says that young people are less optimistic about the future than older people. As the individual grows, the idea of being at the mercy of destiny decreases, instead increasing control over events. Everything is going to be fine.
Diary: NEET
I read an article about NEET (Not engaged in Education, Employment or Training) a few days ago.
Always a space after . and ,
NEET iss are more pessimistic about the future than ordinary people.
NEET refers to a group of people, so use the plural.
The article said that there was a NEET because hewho was alone at home for a long time, and no one foundiscovered his death for a long time.
In this case you're referring to a single person as 'NEET' so plural isn't required like in the previous sentence.
That's creepy......
I recently stayed at home alone for a month.
I think you can link this sentence with the next one by using a comma instead of a full stop, it flows better.
Not for quarantine.
It' was just for winter vacation and I doidn't want to go out......
Past tense as the action is finished.
The article also says that young people are less optimistic about the future than older people.
As the individual grows, the idea of being at the mercy of destiny decreases, instead increasing control over events.
Everything is going to be fine.
Feedback
Good overall, personally I dislike reading texts with a lot of ellipses (...), but its not a big deal if you do, and generally we use three . for an elipsis.
Feb. 26, 2021
Thanks ^_^
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I read an article about NEET (Not engaged in Education,Employment or Training) a few days ago. I read an article about NEET (Not engaged in Education, Employment or Training) a few days ago. Always a space after . and , |
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NEET is more pessimistic about the future than ordinary people. NEET NEET refers to a group of people, so use the plural. |
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The article said that there was a NEET because he was alone at home for a long time, and no one found his death for a long time. The article said that there was a NEET In this case you're referring to a single person as 'NEET' so plural isn't required like in the previous sentence. |
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That's creepy...... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I recently stayed at home alone for a month. I recently stayed at home alone for a month. I think you can link this sentence with the next one by using a comma instead of a full stop, it flows better. |
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Not for quarantine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's just for winter vacation and I don't want to go out...... It Past tense as the action is finished. |
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The article also says that young people are less optimistic about the future than older people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As the individual grows, the idea of being at the mercy of destiny decreases, instead increasing control over events. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Everything is going to be fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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