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Feb. 26, 2021

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Diary: Monkeys On The Highway

Today I read a news that a group of Golden Snub-nosed Monkeys were coming down the mountain to stop cars on the highway. It's not because the environment they living has become better, but feeding food makes wild animals lose their natural fear of people. It adds the possibility of animals be hit by moving vehicles or might try to enter vehicles in search of food. Besides, human foods aren't nutritious enough for animals and may cause serious health problems. Remembered when I was a kid, once I went to the zoo and threw a bag of chips to peacocks to show my love. It sucks. I wish someone would have stopped me back then.

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Diary: Monkeys On The Highway

Today I read ain the news that a group of Golden Snub-nosed Monkeys were coming down the mountain to stop cars on the highway.

“Read in the news that” or “read a news article about”

It's not because the environment they live ing has become better, but feeding them food makes wild animals lose their natural fear of people.

It addincreases the possibility ofthat animals might be hit by moving vehicles or might try to enter vehicles in search of food.

Besides, human foods aren't nutritious enough for animals and may cause serious health problems.

RI remembered when I was a kid, once I went to the zoo and threw a bag of chips to peacocks to show my love.

It sucks.

I wish someone would have stopped me back then.

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heyyawn

Feb. 27, 2021

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Thanks :)

Remembered when I was a kid, once I went to the zoo and threw a bag of chips to peacocks to show my love.


RI remembered when I was a kid, once I went to the zoo and threw a bag of chips to peacocks to show my love.

It sucks.


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Diary: Monkeys On The Highway


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Today I read a news that a group of Golden Snub-nosed Monkeys were coming down the mountain to stop cars on the highway.


Today I read ain the news that a group of Golden Snub-nosed Monkeys were coming down the mountain to stop cars on the highway.

“Read in the news that” or “read a news article about”

It's not because the environment they living has become better, but feeding food makes wild animals lose their natural fear of people.


It's not because the environment they live ing has become better, but feeding them food makes wild animals lose their natural fear of people.

It adds the possibility of animals be hit by moving vehicles or might try to enter vehicles in search of food.


It addincreases the possibility ofthat animals might be hit by moving vehicles or might try to enter vehicles in search of food.

Besides, human foods aren't nutritious enough for animals and may cause serious health problems.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wish someone would have stopped me back then.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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