March 11, 2021
Diary: March 11th (pt.1)
Today is the day I went back to school, and it was also the first day I did a new part-time job. What makes me most happy is that although the school is closed management, it still allows in and out! I used to worry about not letting out, and I had to jump over the iron fence in order to work. To enter and exit the school, you need to apply through a page in WeChat. When entering the school gate, scan the QR code on the front of the security guard's chest, show him the health code, and you can enter.
Today is the day I went back to school, and it was also the first day I did amy new part-time job.
What makes me the most happy is that although the school ihas closed its management, it still allows people to go in and out!
I used to worry about not letting out, andt gave me a lot of trouble when the school was on lockdown. I had to jump over the iron fence in order to work.
I assume this is what you mean - when you say you "worry", it implies that you were upset, but not that anything necessarily happened. Saying that "it gave me trouble" shows that both you were upset and that the lockdown caused physical problems beyond your emotions.
To enter and exit the school, you need to apply through a page in WeChat.
When entering the school gate, you need scan the QR code on the front of the security guard's chest, and show him the health code, and you can. Only then are you allowed to enter.
It sounds a little better to use the structure "only then...", it's like 先经过————才可以————
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Diary: March 11th (pt.1) |
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Today is the day I went back to school, and it was also the first day I did a new part-time job. Today is the day I went back to school, and it was also the first day I did |
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What makes me most happy is that although the school is closed management, it still allows in and out! What makes me the most happy is that although the school |
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I used to worry about not letting out, and I had to jump over the iron fence in order to work. I I assume this is what you mean - when you say you "worry", it implies that you were upset, but not that anything necessarily happened. Saying that "it gave me trouble" shows that both you were upset and that the lockdown caused physical problems beyond your emotions. |
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To enter and exit the school, you need to apply through a page in WeChat. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When entering the school gate, scan the QR code on the front of the security guard's chest, show him the health code, and you can enter. When entering the school gate, you need scan the QR code on the front of the security guard's chest It sounds a little better to use the structure "only then...", it's like 先经过————才可以———— |
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