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mantekhan

July 18, 2025

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Diary — July 18 — Day nine.

Today has been a beatiful day, I traveled to an eco park close to my city, it is around 1 hour from my house, it is named 'Parque Arví'.
I come here with my friend Felipe (I am writing this here) we went to a river and we swimed in there. We also ate here, in the natural. I should love if I can put some photos on the page, but I might that I cannot. My day doesn't finished yet, I will go to the gym and do my chest routine and maybe some of cardio.

Yesterday wasn't a very interestful day, just it be like the other ones, I did my routine as normal, I ate in my house and the only interestful thing was the plan that we made to travel today.

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Today has been a beautiful day,. I traveled to an eco park close to my city, i. It is around 1 hour from my house, i. It is named 'Parque Arví'.

I coame here with my friend Felipe (I am writing this here) wat the park). We went to a river and we swimedam in there.

We also ate here, in the naturale.

I shwould love if I canould put some photos on the page, but I mightfind that I cannot.

Remember this construction: "I would _______ if I could"

My day doeisn't finished yet,. I will go to the gym and do my chest routine and maybe some of cardio.

Yesterday wasn't a very interestfuling day, just it be. It was just like the other ones,. I did my routine as normal, I ate in myat housme and the only interestfuling thing was the plan that we made to travel today.

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Great job. Just a few corrections.

Yesterday wasn't a very interestful day, just it be like the other ones, I did my routine as normal, I ate in my house and the only interestful thing was the plan that we made to travel today.


Yesterday wasn't a very interestfuling day, just it be. It was just like the other ones,. I did my routine as normal, I ate in myat housme and the only interestfuling thing was the plan that we made to travel today.

Diary — July 18 — Day nine.


Today has been a beatiful day, I traveled to an eco park close to my city, it is around 1 hour from my house, it is named 'Parque Arví'.


Today has been a beautiful day,. I traveled to an eco park close to my city, i. It is around 1 hour from my house, i. It is named 'Parque Arví'.

I come here with my friend Felipe (I am writing this here) we went to a river and we swimed in there.


I coame here with my friend Felipe (I am writing this here) wat the park). We went to a river and we swimedam in there.

We also ate here, in the natural.


We also ate here, in the naturale.

I should love if I can put some photos on the page, but I might that I cannot.


I shwould love if I canould put some photos on the page, but I mightfind that I cannot.

Remember this construction: "I would _______ if I could"

My day doesn't finished yet, I will go to the gym and do my chest routine and maybe some of cardio.


My day doeisn't finished yet,. I will go to the gym and do my chest routine and maybe some of cardio.

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