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Diary — July 10 — Day four.

Yesterday was a normal day, I did my routine as normally, I trained in the gym, I studied English, etc. But, there's something new, I installed again a videogame to play with an Argentinian friend. Today I woke up earlier than normally because I needed to do an extra job. I finished my journal at 3:00 PM and nothing else ended (I'm not sure if 'Nothing else ended' exists on English) , I went to the gym and I did my Bicep routine, but I can't did it completly because I needed to go for my mother on her job.

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Diary — July 10 — Day four.

Yesterday was a normal day, I did my routine as normally,. I trained in the gym, I studied English, etc.

But, there's something new,. I installed again a videogame to play with an Argentinian friend.

Today I woke up earlier than normally because I needed to do an extra job.

I finished my journal at 3:00 PM and nothing else ended (I'm not sure if 'Nothing else ended' exists on English) , I went to the gym and I did my Bbicep routine, but I can't diddid it finish it completely because I needed to go forand pick up my mother onfrom her jobwork.

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Thank you so much!

Yesterday was a normal day, I did my routine as normallyusual, I trained in the gym, I studied English, etc.

"As normally" is grammatically correct but sounds a bit strange in informal English. "As usual" would be more common.

But, there's something new, I installed again another video game to play with an Argentinian friend.

"Video game" is two words in English.

"I installed again a video game" is perfectly understandable, but the word order is just a little mixed up. "I again installed a video game" could work, or "I installed another video game" might be more natural.

Today I woke up earlier than normally because I needed to do an extra job.

I finished my journal at 3:00 PM and nothing else ended (I'm not sure if 'Nothing else happended' exists on English) , I went to the gym and I did my Bbicep routine, but I caouldn't dido it completely because I needed to go formeet my mother onat her job.

"Can" is a tricky auxiliary verb. Its past tense is "could" and the other verb in the sentence stays in the infinitive --> "I can't did it completely" is correctly expressed as "I couldn't do it completely"

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Excellent entry! Mostly very natural, normal writing. Keep working on the past tense of auxiliary verbs: "I couldn't do it" or "You did want to eat it" or "We would have gone"

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Thank you so much!

I'll improve with these.

Yesterday was a normal day,. I did my routine as normally,: I trained inat the gym, I studied English, etc.

But, there'sI also did something new,. I re-installed again a videogame to play with an Argentinian friend.

Today I woke up earlier than normally because I needed to do an extra job.

I finished my journal at 3:00 PM and nothing else ended (I'm not sure if 'Nwoth nothing else happended' exists on English) ,. I went to the gym and I did my Bbicep routine, but I can't didouldn't finish it completely because I needed to go fortake my mother ton her job.

I'm not sure what "nothing else ended" is supposed to mean, sorry!

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Thank you so much!!
I am not sure if it also exists in English.. It means like 'exactly when I finished, I did something'

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Maybe "The time turned to 3pm just as I finished writing." would work.

Diary — July 10 — Day four.


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Yesterday was a normal day, I did my routine as normally, I trained in the gym, I studied English, etc.


Yesterday was a normal day,. I did my routine as normally,: I trained inat the gym, I studied English, etc.

Yesterday was a normal day, I did my routine as normallyusual, I trained in the gym, I studied English, etc.

"As normally" is grammatically correct but sounds a bit strange in informal English. "As usual" would be more common.

Yesterday was a normal day, I did my routine as normally,. I trained in the gym, I studied English, etc.

But, there's something new, I installed again a videogame to play with an Argentinian friend.


But, there'sI also did something new,. I re-installed again a videogame to play with an Argentinian friend.

But, there's something new, I installed again another video game to play with an Argentinian friend.

"Video game" is two words in English. "I installed again a video game" is perfectly understandable, but the word order is just a little mixed up. "I again installed a video game" could work, or "I installed another video game" might be more natural.

But, there's something new,. I installed again a videogame to play with an Argentinian friend.

Today I woke up earlier than normally because I needed to do an extra job.


Today I woke up earlier than normally because I needed to do an extra job.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I finished my journal at 3:00 PM and nothing else ended (I'm not sure if 'Nothing else ended' exists on English) , I went to the gym and I did my Bicep routine, but I can't did it completly because I needed to go for my mother on her job.


I finished my journal at 3:00 PM and nothing else ended (I'm not sure if 'Nwoth nothing else happended' exists on English) ,. I went to the gym and I did my Bbicep routine, but I can't didouldn't finish it completely because I needed to go fortake my mother ton her job.

I'm not sure what "nothing else ended" is supposed to mean, sorry!

I finished my journal at 3:00 PM and nothing else ended (I'm not sure if 'Nothing else happended' exists on English) , I went to the gym and I did my Bbicep routine, but I caouldn't dido it completely because I needed to go formeet my mother onat her job.

"Can" is a tricky auxiliary verb. Its past tense is "could" and the other verb in the sentence stays in the infinitive --> "I can't did it completely" is correctly expressed as "I couldn't do it completely"

I finished my journal at 3:00 PM and nothing else ended (I'm not sure if 'Nothing else ended' exists on English) , I went to the gym and I did my Bbicep routine, but I can't diddid it finish it completely because I needed to go forand pick up my mother onfrom her jobwork.

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