March 31, 2025
diary dia 03/30
hey there, it' me Berg, I'm from Brazil, my country is so beatifull, I was born in Marabá in Pará, but I grew up in Fortaleza, I'm 33 years old very old kkkk, I work as a IT, I work near my house, I live with my wifi, his name's Ilzanete B., she's a mature women and her has a blound hair, In my free time, I like studying japonese and read books about chunks of language.
dDiary dia 03/30
hHey there, it's me Berg,. I'm from Brazil, m. My country is so beautifull,. I was born in Marabá in Pará, but I grew up in Fortaleza,. I'm 33 years old, very old kkkk,lol. I work as a IT,in IT and I work near my house,. I live with my wifie, hiser name's Ilzanete B., s She's a mature women and her has aan with blounde hair,. In my free time, I like studying jJapoanese and reading books about chunks of languages.
When you said "kkkk" I knew you were from Brazil right away lol. In English, we usually say "lol" if something's funny.
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Break up your sentences using "." not "," - this also makes it easier to correct. :)
hHey there, it's me, Berg,. I'm from Brazil, and my country is so beautifull,. I was born in Marabá in Pará, but I grew up in Fortaleza,. I'm 33 years old, very old kkkk,. I work as a IT, I workin IT and it is near my house,. I live with my wifi, hise and her name' is Ilzanete B., s She's a mature womean and her has as blounde hair, . In my free time, I like studying jJapoanese and reading books about chunks of language.
I think you meant "bunch" instead of "chunk" here. If that is the case then the sentence would be "In my free time, I like studying Japanese and reading books about bunch of languages."
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Good job! By the way, 33 is not old at all!
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hey there, it' me Berg, I'm from Brazil, my country is so beatifull, I was born in Marabá in Pará, but I grew up in Fortaleza, I'm 33 years old very old kkkk, I work as a IT, I work near my house, I live with my wifi, his name's Ilzanete B., she's a mature women and her has a blound hair, In my free time, I like studying japonese and read books about chunks of language.
I think you meant "bunch" instead of "chunk" here. If that is the case then the sentence would be "In my free time, I like studying Japanese and reading books about bunch of languages."
When you said "kkkk" I knew you were from Brazil right away lol. In English, we usually say "lol" if something's funny. |
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