July 15, 2021
Diary
What is taught in school is very elementary and far from adequate. Sober awareness is necessary. Don't let the slowness and gentleness of school kill your dreams. For many people, the only thing that the school really gives them is time. And it's really quite a shame that many students waste that time, or spend it restlessly in aimless effort.
Diary
What is taught in school is very elementary and far from being adequate.
Sober awareness is necessary.
'Sober awareness' is sort of a weird expression. I'm not entirely sure what you mean here.
Don't let the slowness and gentleness of school kill your dreams.
For many people, the only thing that their school really gives them is time.
And it's really quite a shame that many students waste that time, or spend itare restlessly in and spend it aimless effortly.
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Sounds like you're not satisfied with the education system. I don't think most people are!
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What is taught in school is very elementary and far from adequate. What is taught in school is very elementary and far from being adequate. |
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Sober awareness is necessary. Sober awareness is necessary. 'Sober awareness' is sort of a weird expression. I'm not entirely sure what you mean here. |
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Don't let the slowness and gentleness of school kill your dreams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For many people, the only thing that the school really gives them is time. For many people, the only thing that their school really gives them is time. |
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And it's really quite a shame that many students waste that time, or spend it restlessly in aimless effort. And it's really quite a shame that many students waste that time, or |
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