Oct. 20, 2023
Diary 3 😀
I am not a very self-disciplined person. Considering health as my most important concern, I never starve myself even though I want to lose weight so much. Due to my special work schedule, I usually go to bed after midnight, so I usually get up late. I often exercise on my spinning at home and take a shower later. Sometimes I take a walk on my treadmill and do some reading at the same time. I also have to take good care of my skin. Reading, exercising and skin care are all my regular tasks. Without perfect time management, I can hardly make time for English learning and musical instrument practicing. I guess I have to sleep a little less.
Considering hHealth ais my most important concern ( currently), I never starve myself even though I really want to lose weight so much.
Due to my specialparticular work schedule, I usually go to bed after midnight, so I usunormally get up late.
Sometimes I take a walk on my treadmill and do some reading at the same time.
Reading, exercising and skin care are all my regular tasks.part of my routine¶
Without perfect time management, I can hardly make time for English learning andlearning English and practicing the (add the name of the musical instrument practicing.)
I guess I have to sleep a little less.
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Trust me,I am not a self-disiplined person either but I try to stick to a routine and spend time on learning a language or exercising. You seem to be on the right track but if you are prioritizing your health,make sure you are still sleeping enough because at the end of the day you cannot fonction correctly if you are tired. You did a good job writing this :)
Oct. 24, 2023
Thank you for your correction and kind advice :) I really appreciate that you share your own experience with me.
Diary 3 😀
I am not a very self-disciplined person.
ConsideringMy health ais my mostreally important concern,to me so I never starve myself even though I really want to lose weight so much.
Due to my special work schedule, I usually go to bed after midnight, so I usually and get up late.
I often exercise on my spinning bike at home and take a shower later.
Sometimes I take a walk on my treadmill and do some reading at the same time.
I also have to take good care of my skin.
Reading, exercising, and skin care are all part of my regular tasksroutine.
Without perfect time management, I can hardly make time for English learning and musical instrument practicingpracticing English and piano.
It's sounds better if you specifically say the the instrument. I just picked one since I wasn't sure
I guess I have to sleep a little less.
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Nice work! Well written and easy to understand
Oct. 24, 2023
Thank you for your correction and encouragement. :)
Diary 3 😀
I am not a very self-disciplined person.
Considering health as my most important concernPrioritizing my health, I never starve myself even though I want to lose weight so much.
I often exercise on my spinningtationary bike at home and take a shower later.
Sometimes I take a walk on my treadmill and do some reading at the same time.
I also have to take good care of my skin.
Reading, exercising and skin care are all part of my regular tasksroutine.
Without perfect time management, I can hardly make time for English learning and for practicing musical instrument practicings.
I guess I have to sleep a little less.
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Considering health as my most important concern, I never starve myself even though I want to lose weight so much.
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