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daichi

Sept. 19, 2023

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I traveled to Bangkok last week. This was the first time. The city felt bigger than I imaged. Many hotels and offices were under construction and I found the urban area would extend in the near future.
I saw friends who had been to my college as an exchange student, and they took me around there. When I had trouble getting Thai language, they interpreted.
Thanks to them I enjoyed the trip well.

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Diary

I traveled to Bangkok last week.

This was the first time (visiting).

"Visiting" can be added to make the sentence clearer.

The city felt bigger than I imagined.

Many hotels and offices were under construction, and I found out that the urban area would extepand in the near future.

I sawmet friends who had been toattended my college as an exchange students, and they tookshowed me around there.

When I had trouble gettingunderstanding the Thai language, they interpreted for me.

Thanks to them, I thoroughly enjoyed the trip well.

"thoroughly enjoy" is more natural than "enjoy well"

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Great diary entry! Thanks for sharing your experience with us! I hope you can make more good memories like the ones you made in Bangkok!

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daichi

Sept. 20, 2023

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Thank you!

Diary


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I traveled to Bangkok last week.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This was the first time.


This was the first time (visiting).

"Visiting" can be added to make the sentence clearer.

The city felt bigger than I imaged.


The city felt bigger than I imagined.

Many hotels and offices were under construction and I found the urban area would extend in the near future.


Many hotels and offices were under construction, and I found out that the urban area would extepand in the near future.

I saw friends who had been to my college as an exchange student, and they took me around there.


I sawmet friends who had been toattended my college as an exchange students, and they tookshowed me around there.

When I had trouble getting Thai language, they interpreted.


When I had trouble gettingunderstanding the Thai language, they interpreted for me.

Thanks to them I enjoyed the trip well.


Thanks to them, I thoroughly enjoyed the trip well.

"thoroughly enjoy" is more natural than "enjoy well"

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