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sherry0128

Feb. 9, 2023

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Diary 2/7 & 2/8

2/7
I have been annoyed by the canker sores for five days. They hurt like hell! The reason is that I bite myself. At first, I just thought I could do nothing and wait until it heals. No, I’m wrong, it doesn't work. Moreover, it became bigger and bigger. Every time I eat food, it always hurts a lot. I started to use the ointment and eat Vitamin C. Now, it has become better. I believe that it doesn’t take more than three days to heal. Afterward, I can eat whatever I want!

2/8
Today I started to pack up my luggage since I will return to the apartment in two days. Time flies, the winter vacation will end soon. I have improved this winter vacation, instead of wasting time vegging out. Although I don’t have much studying time as I expected, I only have one item of my schedule that is not done. And I think it can be done in three days. I’m looking forward to the new semester because I can control my time more easily.

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Diary 2/7 & 2/8

2/7

I have been annoyed by thea canker sores for five days.

TheyIt hurts like hell!

The reason is thatI have it is because I bite myself.

At first, I just thought I cshould do nothing and wait until it healsed.

No, I’m wrong, it doesn't work.

Moreover, it became bigger and bigger.

Every time I eat food, it always hurts a lot.

I started to use thean ointment and eattake Vitamin C. Now, it has become better.

I believe that it doesn’t take more than three days to heal.

Afterward, I can eat whatever I want!

2/8

Today I started to pack up my luggage since I will return to the apartment in two days.

Time flies, t. The winter vacation will end soon.

I have improved this winter vacation, instead of wasting time vegging out.

Although I doidn’t have as much studying time as I expected, I only have one item ofn my schedulelist that is not done and I think it can be done in three days.

And I think it can be done in three days.

This is a sentence fragment.

I’m looking forward to the new semester because I can control my time more easily.

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Good for you and good work!

Diary 2/7 & 2/8

2/7

I have been annoyed by the canker sores for five days.

They hurt like hell!

The reason is that I bite myself.

At first, I just thought I could do nothing and just wait until it heals.

No, I’mI was wrong, it doesidn't work.

Moreover, ithey became bigger and bigger.

Every time I eat food, it always hurts a lot.

Sort of redundant to say everytime and always

I started to use thean ointment and eat Vitamin C. Now, it has become better.

I believe that it doesn’won't take more than three days to heal.

Afterward, I can eat whatever I want!

2/8

Today I started to pack up my luggage since I will return to the apartment in two days.

Time flies, the winter vacation will end soon.

I have improved this winter vacation, instead of wasting time vegging out.

Although I don’idn't have as much studying time as I expected, I only have one item ofn my schedule that is not done.

And I think it can be done in three days.

Diary 2/7 & 2/8


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2/7


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I have been annoyed by the canker sores for five days.


I have been annoyed by the canker sores for five days.

I have been annoyed by thea canker sores for five days.

They hurt like hell!


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TheyIt hurts like hell!

The reason is that I bite myself.


The reason is that I bite myself.

The reason is thatI have it is because I bite myself.

At first, I just thought I could do nothing and wait until it heals.


At first, I just thought I could do nothing and just wait until it heals.

At first, I just thought I cshould do nothing and wait until it healsed.

No, I’m wrong, it doesn't work.


No, I’mI was wrong, it doesidn't work.

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Moreover, it became bigger and bigger.


Moreover, ithey became bigger and bigger.

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Every time I eat food, it always hurts a lot.


Every time I eat food, it always hurts a lot.

Sort of redundant to say everytime and always

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I started to use the ointment and eat Vitamin C. Now, it has become better.


I started to use thean ointment and eat Vitamin C. Now, it has become better.

I started to use thean ointment and eattake Vitamin C. Now, it has become better.

I believe that it doesn’t take more than three days to heal.


I believe that it doesn’won't take more than three days to heal.

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Afterward, I can eat whatever I want!


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

2/8


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Today I started to pack up my luggage since I will return to the apartment in two days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I started to pack up my luggage since I will return to the apartment in two days.

Time flies, the winter vacation will end soon.


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Time flies, t. The winter vacation will end soon.

I have improved this winter vacation, instead of wasting time vegging out.


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Although I don’t have much studying time as I expected, I only have one item of my schedule that is not done.


Although I don’idn't have as much studying time as I expected, I only have one item ofn my schedule that is not done.

Although I doidn’t have as much studying time as I expected, I only have one item ofn my schedulelist that is not done and I think it can be done in three days.

And I think it can be done in three days.


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And I think it can be done in three days.

This is a sentence fragment.

I’m looking forward to the new semester because I can control my time more easily.


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