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zaozao

Nov. 16, 2022

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The weather was getting colder and colder, and simultaneously getting out of my bed becomes harder and harder for me. I might have gotten up early if I had to have a class in physical classroom. Anyway, who doesn’t like to wake up naturally?

In the afternoon, I watched some videos from a YouTuber named Jedcal. I was wondering why his video could be so amazing, the cinematic style and the cool edition. A bunch of time and effort must have been put into making these videos, as well as high-end photographic equipments.

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The weather wais getting colder and colder, and simultaneously getting out of my bed becomes harder and harder for me.

"my" isn't wrong it's just not necessary - "getting out of bed" sounds more natural

also, your verbs have to match in tense: either "the weather was getting colder" + "getting out of bed BECAME harder" or "the weather IS getting colder" + "getting out of bed becomes harder"

I was wondering why his video could bs are so amazing, with their cinematic style and the cool editions.

i think you mean all of his videos and not just one, so it's videoS, but that could be a typo

i can't explain how or why, but you can wonder WHY his videos ARE amazing, or you can wonder HOW his videos COULD BE so amazing, but you can't mix them. i don't know why, it just sounds incorrect.

they're so amazing "because of" or "with" the cinematic style they have, and i think the last thing was meant to be cool edits? an edition is a version/iteration/variant/form of something. edits are things in film that make multiple scenes flow together (or it's stuff added on screen like confetti or text or whatever)

A bunch of time and effort must have been put into making these videos, as well as high-end photographic equipments.

equipment, when made plural, is still equipment. it's like the words deer or sheep.

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zaozao

Nov. 17, 2022

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I was wondering why his video could bs are so amazing, with their cinematic style and the cool editions.

“Why…are…?” “How…could be…” that is the language thing. I should try to find a feeling of the English language. And yeah I mean “edits”. Thank you very much for correcting!!

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The weather was getting colder and colder, and simultaneously getting out of my bed becomes harder and harder for me.


The weather wais getting colder and colder, and simultaneously getting out of my bed becomes harder and harder for me.

"my" isn't wrong it's just not necessary - "getting out of bed" sounds more natural also, your verbs have to match in tense: either "the weather was getting colder" + "getting out of bed BECAME harder" or "the weather IS getting colder" + "getting out of bed becomes harder"

I might have gotten up early if I had to have a class in physical classroom.


Anyway, who doesn’t like to wake up naturally?


In the afternoon, I watched some videos from a YouTuber named Jedcal.


I was wondering why his video could be so amazing, the cinematic style and the cool edition.


I was wondering why his video could bs are so amazing, with their cinematic style and the cool editions.

i think you mean all of his videos and not just one, so it's videoS, but that could be a typo i can't explain how or why, but you can wonder WHY his videos ARE amazing, or you can wonder HOW his videos COULD BE so amazing, but you can't mix them. i don't know why, it just sounds incorrect. they're so amazing "because of" or "with" the cinematic style they have, and i think the last thing was meant to be cool edits? an edition is a version/iteration/variant/form of something. edits are things in film that make multiple scenes flow together (or it's stuff added on screen like confetti or text or whatever)

A bunch of time and effort must have been put into making these videos, as well as high-end photographic equipments.


A bunch of time and effort must have been put into making these videos, as well as high-end photographic equipments.

equipment, when made plural, is still equipment. it's like the words deer or sheep.

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