Nov. 16, 2022
Diary
11.16
The weather was getting colder and colder, and simultaneously getting out of my bed becomes harder and harder for me. I might have gotten up early if I had to have a class in physical classroom. Anyway, who doesn’t like to wake up naturally?
In the afternoon, I watched some videos from a YouTuber named Jedcal. I was wondering why his video could be so amazing, the cinematic style and the cool edition. A bunch of time and effort must have been put into making these videos, as well as high-end photographic equipments.
The weather wais getting colder and colder, and simultaneously getting out of my bed becomes harder and harder for me.
"my" isn't wrong it's just not necessary - "getting out of bed" sounds more natural
also, your verbs have to match in tense: either "the weather was getting colder" + "getting out of bed BECAME harder" or "the weather IS getting colder" + "getting out of bed becomes harder"
I was wondering why his video could bs are so amazing, with their cinematic style and the cool editions.
i think you mean all of his videos and not just one, so it's videoS, but that could be a typo
i can't explain how or why, but you can wonder WHY his videos ARE amazing, or you can wonder HOW his videos COULD BE so amazing, but you can't mix them. i don't know why, it just sounds incorrect.
they're so amazing "because of" or "with" the cinematic style they have, and i think the last thing was meant to be cool edits? an edition is a version/iteration/variant/form of something. edits are things in film that make multiple scenes flow together (or it's stuff added on screen like confetti or text or whatever)
A bunch of time and effort must have been put into making these videos, as well as high-end photographic equipments.
equipment, when made plural, is still equipment. it's like the words deer or sheep.
Nov. 17, 2022
I was wondering why his video could bs are so amazing, with their cinematic style and the cool editions.
“Why…are…?” “How…could be…” that is the language thing. I should try to find a feeling of the English language. And yeah I mean “edits”. Thank you very much for correcting!!
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The weather was getting colder and colder, and simultaneously getting out of my bed becomes harder and harder for me. The weather "my" isn't wrong it's just not necessary - "getting out of bed" sounds more natural also, your verbs have to match in tense: either "the weather was getting colder" + "getting out of bed BECAME harder" or "the weather IS getting colder" + "getting out of bed becomes harder" |
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I might have gotten up early if I had to have a class in physical classroom. |
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Anyway, who doesn’t like to wake up naturally? |
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In the afternoon, I watched some videos from a YouTuber named Jedcal. |
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I was wondering why his video could be so amazing, the cinematic style and the cool edition. I was wondering why his video i think you mean all of his videos and not just one, so it's videoS, but that could be a typo i can't explain how or why, but you can wonder WHY his videos ARE amazing, or you can wonder HOW his videos COULD BE so amazing, but you can't mix them. i don't know why, it just sounds incorrect. they're so amazing "because of" or "with" the cinematic style they have, and i think the last thing was meant to be cool edits? an edition is a version/iteration/variant/form of something. edits are things in film that make multiple scenes flow together (or it's stuff added on screen like confetti or text or whatever) |
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A bunch of time and effort must have been put into making these videos, as well as high-end photographic equipments. A bunch of time and effort must have been put into making these videos, as well as high-end photographic equipment equipment, when made plural, is still equipment. it's like the words deer or sheep. |
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