Feb. 9, 2023
Diary 2/5 & 2/6
Diary 2/5
Today our family attended the wedding banquet. Its main characters are my uncle's family,including him, his wife and their child who is under one year old. It was held at a Japanese restaurant. All of the dishes were so delectable and the atmosphere was great! So, all the attendants had a wonderful time. When I saw my little cousin, I was over the moon! He is so tiny and adorable. This little boy must have a blissful childhood because he has two older brothers and three older sisters!
Diary 2/6
Today our family went to a historical urban area of the city where I have lived by LRT. It’s been a long time since I went there due to the long distance. It changed a lot. There are many new stores selling seafood. There is also a ferry pier station, but we didn’t take the ferry for the limited time. Whoever goes there will eat a bowl of shaved ice or shaved snow. So, we did it without doubt. The luckiest thing is today is a beautiful day.
Diary 2/5
Today our family attended thea wedding banquet.
ItsThe main characters are my uncle's family,including himpeople to me were my uncle, his wife and their child who is under one year old.
"Main characters" makes it sound as if the people were fictional but in this case they're not.
It was held at a Japanese restaurant.
All of the dishes were so delectablefood was so delicious and the atmosphere was great!
We don't really use "delectable" in the US any more. It sounds very 19th century to me.
So, all the attendantees had a wonderful time.
"Attendant" can refer to people who were paid to work there.
When I saw my little cousin, I was over the moon!
He is so tiny and adorable.
This little boy must have a blissful childhood because he has two older brothers and three older sisters!
Diary 2/6
Today our family went to a historical urban area of the city where I have lived by LRTused to live.
I don't know what "LRT" is so I deleted it.
It’s been a long time since I whave beent there due to the long distance.
It has changed a lot.
There are many new stores selling seafood.
There is also a ferry pier station on the pier, but we didn’t take the ferry forbecause of the limited time we had.
Whoever goes there will eats a bowl of shaved ice or shaved snow.
So, we did ijust that without douba second thought.
This is more how we would say it in the US.
The luckiest thing isWe were very lucky that today iwas a beautiful day.
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Diary 2/5 & 2/6 |
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Diary 2/5 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today our family attended the wedding banquet. Today our family attended |
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Its main characters are my uncle's family,including him, his wife and their child who is under one year old.
"Main characters" makes it sound as if the people were fictional but in this case they're not. |
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It was held at a Japanese restaurant. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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All of the dishes were so delectable and the atmosphere was great! All of the We don't really use "delectable" in the US any more. It sounds very 19th century to me. |
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So, all the attendants had a wonderful time. So, all the attend "Attendant" can refer to people who were paid to work there. |
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When I saw my little cousin, I was over the moon! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He is so tiny and adorable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This little boy must have a blissful childhood because he has two older brothers and three older sisters! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Diary 2/6 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today our family went to a historical urban area of the city where I have lived by LRT. Today our family went to a historical urban area of the city where I I don't know what "LRT" is so I deleted it. |
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It’s been a long time since I went there due to the long distance. It’s been a long time since I |
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It changed a lot. It has changed a lot. |
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There are many new stores selling seafood. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is also a ferry pier station, but we didn’t take the ferry for the limited time. There is also a ferry |
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Whoever goes there will eat a bowl of shaved ice or shaved snow. Whoever goes there |
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So, we did it without doubt. So, we did This is more how we would say it in the US. |
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The luckiest thing is today is a beautiful day.
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