Feb. 2, 2023
Diary 2/2
Today I left the library earlier than usual as I needed to buy my bestie’s birthday gift. She loves Rilakkuma so much. Although its merchandise is expensive, it is worth it if she likes my gift I bought! When it comes to a birthday gift, it was my birthday a few days ago. One of my high school friends gave me a very expensive gift. It made me feel so stressed. For me, I don’t give my friends birthday gifts actively, but it’s necessary to send the birthday blessings. It’s because I think considering which birthday gift is suitable may be annoying for someone. His birthday passed this year, so I just can give him the birthday gift next year.
Diary 2/2
Today I left the library earlier than usual as I needed to buy my bestie’s birthday gift.
She loves Rilakkuma so much.
Although its merchandise is expensive, it is worth it if she likes mythe gift I bought!
You're a good friend!
When it comes to aSpeaking of birthday gifts, it was my birthday a few days ago.
One of my high school friends gave me a very expensive gift.
It made me feel so stressed.
FAs for me, I don’t usually give my friends birthday gifts actively, but it’s necessary to send the birthday blessings.
It’s because I think considering which birthday gift is suitable may be annoying for someone.
His birthday has already passed this year, so I just can give him thea birthday gift next year.
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Good work!
Today I left the library earlier than usual as I needed to buy my bestie’s birthday gift.
She loves Rilakkuma so much.
Although its merchandise is expensive, it is worth it if she likes my gift I bought!
When it comes to a birthday gift, it was my birthday a few days ago.
One of my high school friends gave me a very expensive gift.
It made me feel so stressed.
For me, I don’t currently give my friends birthday gifts actively, but it’s necessary to send the birthday blessingwishes.
It’s because I think considering which birthday gift is suitable may be annoying for someone.
His birthday passed this year, so I just can give him the birthday gift next year.
When it comes to a birthday gifts, it was my birthday a few days ago.
Just small grammar correction. Great job!
For me, I don’t actively give my friends birthday gifts actively, but it’s necessary to send the birthday blessings.
Move actively in front of the verb. The sentence now flows better and sounds more natural.
I think it’s because I think considering which birthday gift is suitable may be annoying for someone.
Move ‘I think’ to the front of the sentence.
His birthday passed this year, so I will just can give him the birthday gift next year.
You can use ‘can’ or ‘will’ but put it in front of ‘just’. I recommend ‘will’ because you’re talking about an action you plan to perform in the future :)
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Overall great work! Just some minor corrections to make your sentences sound more natural.
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When it comes to a birthday gift, it was my birthday a few days ago. When it comes to Just small grammar correction. Great job! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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One of my high school friends gave me a very expensive gift. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It made me feel so stressed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For me, I don’t give my friends birthday gifts actively, but it’s necessary to send the birthday blessings. For me, I don’t actively give my friends birthday gifts Move actively in front of the verb. The sentence now flows better and sounds more natural. For me, I don’t currently give my friends birthday gifts
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It’s because I think considering which birthday gift is suitable may be annoying for someone. I think it’s because Move ‘I think’ to the front of the sentence. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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His birthday passed this year, so I just can give him the birthday gift next year. His birthday passed this year, so I will just You can use ‘can’ or ‘will’ but put it in front of ‘just’. I recommend ‘will’ because you’re talking about an action you plan to perform in the future :) This sentence has been marked as perfect! His birthday has already passed this year, so I just can give him |
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