Feb. 19, 2023
Diary 2/17 & 2/18
2/17
Every Friday I don’t have any lectures, so I arrange a part-time job. I work at a mart belonging to my university. It sells so many kinds of goods, including noodles, different flavors of egg rolls, and sweatshirts. To be honest, I just need to sit and do anything I want during my working time. It’s because undergraduate students rarely buy these goods. The customers most are people on a business trip and tourists. Hence, I usually do my stuff, otherwise, I would be bored.
2/18
Although it’s make-up day, I don’t need to take lectures because I don’t have lessons on Monday. The purpose of a make-up day is to compensate for a missed work day. My schedule today is to attend a teaching assistant training program. This semester I become a teaching assistant on a course in general education, so I have to attend this program to get my TA certification. It took me six hours. I felt exhausted after going home. The most cheerful thing is that I understood most of the contents even though it's a program speaking in English.
Diary 2/17 & 2/18
2/17
Every Friday I don’t have any lectures on Fridays, so I arranged to have a part-time job.
I work at a mart which belongings to my university.
It sells so many kinds of goods, including noodles, different flavors of egg rolls, and sweatshirts.
To be honest, I just need to sit and do anything I want during my working time hours.
It’s because undergraduate students rarely buy these goods.
The customers most are are mostly people on a business trips and tourists.
Hence, I usually do my stuff, otherwise, I would be bored.
2/18
Although it’s make-up day, I don’t need to takeattend lectures because I don’t have lessons on Monday.
The purpose of a make-up day is to compensate for a missed work day.
My schedule today is to attend a teaching assistant training program.
This semester I becoame a teaching assistant onfor a course in general education, so I have to attend this program to get my TA certification.
It took me six hours.
I felt exhausted after going home.
The most cheerful thing about it is that I understood most of the contents even though it's a program speakingoken in English.
Congratulations!
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Very good work!
Every Friday I don’'t have any lectures, so I arrange on Fridays, so I took a part-time job.
I feel this reads better
I work atin a mart belonging tostore at my university.
It sells so many kinds of goods, including noodles, different flavors of egg rolls, and sweatshirts.
To be honest, I can just need to sit and do anything I want during my working time.
This could be phrased in a few different ways, but it depends on what you mean specifically. Hopefully I understand correctly.
It’s because undergraduate students rarely buy these goods.
The customers most are are mostly people on a business trips and tourists.
HencTherefore, I usually do my stufentertain myself, otherwise, I would be bored.
I think "therefore" works better here than "hence." I would suggest a little more detail for what you are doing with your time, e.g., "I'm usually reading stuff on my phone."
Although it’s make-up day at school, I don’t need to take any lectures because I don’t have lessons on Monday.
for clarity
The purpose of a make-up day is to compensate for a missed work day.
My schedule today is to attend a teaching assistant training program.
This semester I becomwill be a teaching assistant onfor a course in general education, so I have to attend this program to get my TA certification.
It took me six hours.
I felt exhausted after going home.
The mobest cheerful thingpart is that I understood most of the contents even though it's athe program ispeaking in English.
Awesome!
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Great job! Your English is very good, I made some edits just to sound more natural.
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Every Friday I don’t have any lectures, so I arrange a part-time job.
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To be honest, I just need to sit and do anything I want during my working time. To be honest, I can just This could be phrased in a few different ways, but it depends on what you mean specifically. Hopefully I understand correctly. To be honest, I just need to sit and do anything I want during my work |
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It’s because undergraduate students rarely buy these goods. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hence, I usually do my stuff, otherwise, I would be bored.
I think "therefore" works better here than "hence." I would suggest a little more detail for what you are doing with your time, e.g., "I'm usually reading stuff on my phone." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although it’s make-up day, I don’t need to take lectures because I don’t have lessons on Monday. Although it’s make-up day at school, I don’t need to take any lectures because I don’t have lessons on Monday. for clarity Although it’s make-up day, I don’t need to |
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My schedule today is to attend a teaching assistant training program. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The most cheerful thing is that I understood most of the contents even though it's a program speaking in English. The Awesome! The most cheerful thing about it is that I understood most of the contents even though it's a program sp Congratulations! |
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