Feb. 19, 2023
Diary 2/13 & 2/14
2/13
My roommate bought a pair of high heels and it is 12 centimeters! She had an idea to change her clothing style recently, so she not only bought the heels but also some clothings that she hadn't tried before. I tried the heels with great curiosity since it was my first time trying such high heels. I just walked around our room, my feet felt painful. Suddenly, I really admire those people who can wear high heels and walk for a long time. Not to mention those who can run or even outrun the T-Rex.
2/14
Today is Valentine's Day. Unfortunately, it’s only a normal Tuesday for me. The reason is obvious. Before I was in a relationship with my ex-boyfriend, I had been eager for a boyfriend. At first, I felt delighted when he was by my side and we often chatted for a long long time. As time went by, I found that the changes in my life weren’t what I wanted. I spent too much time on love and thus ignored academics and myself . Afterward, we tried to change this situation, however, the end failed. Now, I have a lot of time just for myself and I get a sense of accomplishment when I do something to improve myself!
Diary 2/13 & 2/14
2/13
My roommate bought a pair of high heels and it isthey are 12 centimeters high!
That's very high!
She had an decidead to change her clothing style recently, so she not only bought the heels but also some clothinges that she hadn't triedworn before.
I tried the heels with great curiosity since it was my first time trying such high heels.
I just walked around our room, but my feet felt painfulhurt.
Suddenly, I really admirefelt admiration for those people who can wear high heels and walk for a long time, not to mention those who can run or even outrun a T-Rex.
Not to mention those who can run or even outrun the T-Rex.
This was a sentence fragment.
2/14
Today is Valentine's Day.
Unfortunately, it’s only a normal Tuesday for me.
The reason is obvious.
Before I was in a relationship with my ex-boyfriend, I had been eager for a boyfriend.
At first, I felt delighted when he was by my side and we often chatted for a long, long time.
As time went by, I found that the changes in my life weren’t what I wanted.
I spent too much time on love and thus ignored academics and myself .
Afterward, we tried to change this situation, however, the end failewe failed in the end.
:(
Now, I have a lot of time just for myself and I get a sense of accomplishment when I do something to improve myself!
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Good for you! Very well written, too!
My roommate bought a pair of high heels, and it isthey are 12 centimeters!
She had an idea to change her clothing style recently, so she not only bought the heels but also some clothinges that she hadn't tried before.
I tried the heels with great curiosity, since it was my first time trying such high heels.
I just walked around our room, but my feet felt painful.
At first, I felt delighted when he was by my side, and we often chatted for a long long time.
I spent too much time on love, and thus ignored academics and myself .
Afterward, we tried to change this situation, h. However, in the end we failed.
Now, I have a lot of time just for myself, and I get a sense of accomplishment when I do something to improve myself!
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Very good! I think reviewing some punctuation rules is all you need to do.
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My roommate bought a pair of high heels and it is 12 centimeters! My roommate bought a pair of high heels, and My roommate bought a pair of high heels and That's very high! |
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She had an idea to change her clothing style recently, so she not only bought the heels but also some clothings that she hadn't tried before. She had an idea to change her clothing style recently, so she not only bought the heels but also some cloth She |
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I tried the heels with great curiosity since it was my first time trying such high heels. I tried the heels with great curiosity, since it was my first time trying such high heels. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I just walked around our room, my feet felt painful. I just walked around our room, but my feet felt painful. I just walked around our room |
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Suddenly, I really admire those people who can wear high heels and walk for a long time. Suddenly, I |
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Not to mention those who can run or even outrun the T-Rex.
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2/14 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is Valentine's Day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unfortunately, it’s only a normal Tuesday for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The reason is obvious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before I was in a relationship with my ex-boyfriend, I had been eager for a boyfriend. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At first, I felt delighted when he was by my side and we often chatted for a long long time. At first, I felt delighted when he was by my side, and we often chatted for a long long time. At first, I felt delighted when he was by my side and we often chatted for a long, long time. |
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As time went by, I found that the changes in my life weren’t what I wanted. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I spent too much time on love and thus ignored academics and myself . I spent too much time on love, and thus ignored academics and myself I spent too much time on love and thus ignored academics and myself |
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Afterward, we tried to change this situation, however, the end failed. Afterward, Afterward, we tried to change this situation, however, :( |
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Now, I have a lot of time just for myself and I get a sense of accomplishment when I do something to improve myself! Now, I have a lot of time just for myself, and I get a sense of accomplishment when I do something to improve myself! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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