Feb. 13, 2023
Diary 2/11 & 2/12
Diary 2/11
My roommate arrived in the afternoon. Every time she goes home, she brings a lot of ingredients before going back. There is no exception this time. Our refrigerator now is full of food. It’s because her family runs a ba wan diner, this is why she has many kinds of ingredients. Her family is so kind that they also prepare mine! By the way, she brings different kinds of ingredients at different times, but the only one is never absent, that is a chicken! She always uses it to make chicken soup and it’s flavorful.
Diary 2/12
My roommate and I went out to buy some stuff. We went to a drugstore to buy some cosmetics because my roommate wants to learn how to make up. She encouraged me to learn together and she told me that a club at our university is to teach people makeup techniques. I didn’t want to learn before because I thought it was not necessary and it took a lot of time and money. But now, I realize makeup is not necessary for an undergraduate student,however, it doesn’t mean I don’t use it for my whole life. I can avoid the situation that I would regret why I didn’t learn before.
Diary 2/11 & 2/12
Diary 2/11
My roommate arrived in thethis afternoon.
Every time she goes home, she brings a lot of ingredients before gocoming back.
There iis time was no exception this time.
Our refrigerator now is full of food.
It’s because her family runs a ba wan diner, t. This is why she has many kinds of ingredients.
Her family is so kind that they also prepare mine!
By the way, she brings different kinds of ingredients at different times, but the only one is never absent, thatmissing is a chicken!
She always uses it to make chicken soup and it’s flavorful.
Diary 2/12
My roommate and I went out to buy some stuff.
We went to a drugstore to buy some cosmetics because my roommate wants to learn how to use make up.
She encouraged me to learn togetwith her and she told me that a club at our university is to teaches people makeup techniques.
I didn’t want to learn before because I thought it was not necessary and it took a lot of time and money.
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I can avoid thea situation that I wouldmight regret whybecause I dihadn’t learned before.
Feedback
Good work!
Every time she goes home, she brings a lot of ingredients before going backack with her.
This way of saying it is a bit clearer :)
There iis time was no exception this time.
"X is/was no exception" is a common phrase in English
Our refrigerator is now is full of food.
Or: "Our refrigerator is full of food now."
Her family is so kind that they also prepare minsome for me!
By the way, she brings different kinds of ingredients at different times, but the only one is never absent,; that is a chicken!
She always uses it to make chicken soup and it’s so flavorful.
This sounds slightly more natural, but your original sentence wasn't wrong
We went to a drugstore to buy some cosmetics because my roommate wants to learn how to do make up.
or "apply/put on/wear makeup"
She encouraged me to learn together and she told me that there is a club at our university is tothat teaches people makeup techniques.
I didn’t want to learn about makeup before because I thought it was not necessary and it took a lot of time and money.
But now, while I realize makeup is not necessary for an undergraduate student,however, it doesn’t mean I dwon’'t use it for my wholeat any point my life.
I can avoid thea situation that I wouldwhere I might regret whythat I didn’t learn before.
Feedback
Good job!
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My roommate arrived in the afternoon. My roommate arrived |
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Every time she goes home, she brings a lot of ingredients before going back. Every time she goes home, she brings a lot of ingredients b This way of saying it is a bit clearer :) Every time she goes home, she brings a lot of ingredients before |
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There is no exception this time. Th "X is/was no exception" is a common phrase in English Th |
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Our refrigerator now is full of food. Our refrigerator is now Or: "Our refrigerator is full of food now." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s because her family runs a ba wan diner, this is why she has many kinds of ingredients. It’s because her family runs a ba wan diner |
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Her family is so kind that they also prepare mine! Her family is so kind that they also prepare This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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By the way, she brings different kinds of ingredients at different times, but the only one is never absent, that is a chicken! By the way, she brings different kinds of ingredients at different times, but By the way, she brings different kinds of ingredients at different times, but the only one |
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She always uses it to make chicken soup and it’s flavorful. She always uses it to make chicken soup and it’s so flavorful. This sounds slightly more natural, but your original sentence wasn't wrong This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Diary 2/12 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My roommate and I went out to buy some stuff. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We went to a drugstore to buy some cosmetics because my roommate wants to learn how to make up. We went to a drugstore to buy some cosmetics because my roommate wants to learn how to do make up. or "apply/put on/wear makeup" We went to a drugstore to buy some cosmetics because my roommate wants to learn how to use make up. |
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She encouraged me to learn together and she told me that a club at our university is to teach people makeup techniques. She encouraged me to learn together and she told me that there is a club at our university She encouraged me to learn |
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I didn’t want to learn before because I thought it was not necessary and it took a lot of time and money. I didn’t want to learn about makeup before because I thought it was not necessary and it took a lot of time and money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But now, I realize makeup is not necessary for an undergraduate student,however, it doesn’t mean I don’t use it for my whole life. But now, while I realize makeup is not necessary for an undergraduate student, But now, I realize makeup is not necessary for an undergraduate student, however, it doesn’t mean I |
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I can avoid the situation that I would regret why I didn’t learn before. I can avoid I can avoid |
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