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yjljoy

Feb. 15, 2022

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I got up early today because my duty day is coming.
Yet the actual reason why I got up was too noisy outside.
Today is the 15th day of the 1st month of lunar year, representing the over of the festival Chinese New Year.
So people set off firecrackers intermittently from around 6:45 am to 9:00 am, and my house is just located zone out of our city's firecrackers control area.
What a HIGH beginning of this day.

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I got up early today because my duty day is comingit’s my day on duty.

I’m not sure what a “duty day” is.

Yet the actual reason why I got up was because it was too noisy outside.

Or “Yet I actually got up because it was too noisy outside.”

Today is the 15th day of the 1st month of lunar year, representing the overend of the festival Chinese New Year.

So people set off firecrackers intermittently from around 6:45 am to 9:00 am, and my house is just located zone out of our city's firecrackers control area.

What a HIGH beginning of this day.

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Sounds like an exciting way to wake up… maybe too exciting.

YetNo, the actual reason why I got up was that it was too noisy outside.

Today is the 15th day of the 1st month of lunar year, representing the overend of the festival Chinese New Year festival.

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yjljoy

Feb. 15, 2022

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Thanks for your correction!

Diary 2-1


I got up early today because my duty day is coming.


I got up early today because my duty day is comingit’s my day on duty.

I’m not sure what a “duty day” is.

Yet the actual reason why I got up is noisy outside.


Today is the 15th day of the 1st month of lunar year, representing the over of the festival Chinese New Year.


Today is the 15th day of the 1st month of lunar year, representing the overend of the festival Chinese New Year festival.

Today is the 15th day of the 1st month of lunar year, representing the overend of the festival Chinese New Year.

So people set off firecrackers from around 6:45 am, and my house is just located zone out of our city's firecrackers control area.


What a HIGH beginning of this day.


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Yet the actual reason why I got up was too noisy outside.


YetNo, the actual reason why I got up was that it was too noisy outside.

Yet the actual reason why I got up was because it was too noisy outside.

Or “Yet I actually got up because it was too noisy outside.”

So people set off firecrackers intermittently from around 6:45 am to 9:00 am, and my house is just located zone out of our city's firecrackers control area.


So people set off firecrackers intermittently from around 6:45 am to 9:00 am, and my house is just located zone out of our city's firecrackers control area.

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