Dec. 22, 2022
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On Monday I baked my grandma's poppy seed cake. It wasn't easy because instructions from my grandma were chaotic but after all the cake turned out delicious and exactly like my grandma's. My husband told me that was even better.
Today, my husband and I turned a new wardrobe, because our old one broke. After that, I put all our clothes in the new place, which took me a while.
I have a job interview next week. It looks like it can be a perfect job for me. It's part-time and it is easy to get there by bus. I hope I get this job!
Diary
On Monday I baked my grandma's poppy seed cake.
It wasn't easy because the instructions from my grandma were chaotic but after all of that the cake turned out delicious anyway and exactly like my grandma's.
Nice!
My husband told me that it was even better.
Congratulations!
Today, my husband and I turnedbought a new wardrobe, because our old one broke.
I'm not sure what you mean by "turned" here so this is my best guess.
After thatwards, I put all our clothes in the new placone, which took me a while.
I have a job interview next week.
It looks likeas if it can be a perfect job for me.
That's great!
It's part-time and it is easy to get there by bus.
I hope I get this job!
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Me, too! Best of luck and well done!
Dec. 23, 2022
Thank you ☺️
Diary
On Monday I baked my grandma's poppy seed cake.
It wasn't easy because the instructions from my grandma were chaotic, but after all the cake turned out delicious and exactly like my grandma's.
My husband told me that it was even better.
The "it" is necessary as a subject because without it the reader doesn't know what you're talking about.
Today, my husband and I turned a new wardrobe, because our old one broke.
I'm not exactly sure what you mean here, which is okay, but here are some words to use instead of "turned", because I don't think it makes sense. I'm assuming that you mean a physical wardrobe, something like a closet, not your clothing in general.
- bought
- acquired
- got
- purchased
After that, I put all our clothes in the new placwardrobe, which took me a while.
I, personally, don't think "place" makes the most sense here, though I don't think it's technically wrong.
I have a job interview next week.
It looks like it can be athe perfect job for me.
I don't think "a" is wrong here, but I think "the" sounds more natural.
It's part-time and it is easy to get there by bus.
I hope I get this job!
Feedback
Good job!
:)
Dec. 22, 2022
Today, my husband and I turned a new wardrobe, because our old one broke.
I meant that we assembled the wardrobe. I don't know why I didn't use this word ^^
"Today, my husband and I assembled a new wardrobe, because our old one broke."
Is it correct now? :)
Dec. 22, 2022
I meant that we assembled the wardrobe. I don't know why I didn't use this word ^^ "Today, my husband and I assembled a new wardrobe, because our old one broke." Is it correct now? :)
Yes, assembled is a good word to use. I'm sorry that I just realized this, but I don't think the comma after "today" is correct, I'll add that to my correction now. Nicely done.
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On Monday I baked my grandma's poppy seed cake. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It wasn't easy because instructions from my grandma were chaotic but after all the cake turned out delicious and exactly like my grandma's. It wasn't easy because the instructions from my grandma were chaotic, but after all the cake turned out delicious and exactly like my grandma's. It wasn't easy because the instructions from my grandma were chaotic but after all of that the cake turned out delicious anyway and exactly like my grandma's. Nice! |
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My husband told me that was even better. My husband told me that it was even better. The "it" is necessary as a subject because without it the reader doesn't know what you're talking about. My husband told me that it was even better. Congratulations! |
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Today, my husband and I turned a new wardrobe, because our old one broke. Today I'm not exactly sure what you mean here, which is okay, but here are some words to use instead of "turned", because I don't think it makes sense. I'm assuming that you mean a physical wardrobe, something like a closet, not your clothing in general. - bought - acquired - got - purchased Today, my husband and I I'm not sure what you mean by "turned" here so this is my best guess. |
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After that, I put all our clothes in the new place, which took me a while. After that, I put all our clothes in the new I, personally, don't think "place" makes the most sense here, though I don't think it's technically wrong. After |
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It looks like it can be a perfect job for me. It looks like it can be I don't think "a" is wrong here, but I think "the" sounds more natural. It looks That's great! |
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