Jan. 5, 2023
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Winter vacation begins! I saw many "pineapple babies" when I returned to my apartment by foot. The university I study is surround by many pineapple firms. As a result, I can see the growing process of them. I like pineapple, but if I eat too much it hurts my tongue, so I prefer its processed product: pineapple cake! It tastes perfect and I like it so much. I relaxed and made a studying plan. I scheduled winter vacation, too. I hope I can be productive on this vacation.
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Winter vacation begins!
I saw many "pineapple babies" when I returned to my apartment byon foot.
"On foot" is the set phrase in the US but this is a better sentence:
I saw many "pineapple babies" when I walked back to my apartment.
The university where I study is surrounded by many pineapple firms.
As a result, I can see their growing process of them.
I like pineapple, but if I eat too much it hurts my tongue, so I prefer its processed product: pineapple cake!
It tastes perfect and I like it so much.
I relaxed and made a studying plan.
We use "study plan" in the US.
I scheduled winter vacation, too.
I hope I can be productive onduring thisat vacation, too.
I can't tell whether you're on vacation now or whether you want to be productive during your just scheduled winter vacation.
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Good work!
Jan. 9, 2023
I hope I can be productive onduring thisat vacation, too.
Does the sentence be used when winter vacation didn't begin? At that day, winter vacation didn't begin.
Jan. 9, 2023
Thank you so much!
Jan. 9, 2023
I hope I can be productive onduring thisat vacation, too.
Does the sentence be used if it is on vacation now?
Jan. 9, 2023
To use it if you're on vacation now, I would say instead, "I hope I can be productive during this vacation, too." I just swapped "that" for "this."
Jan. 9, 2023
Thank you so much!
You're very welcome!
Winter vacation begins! (today)! / Winter vacation has begun!
If it already started; use 'has begun' because it came before all the other past events you are describing in this journal
I saw many "pineapple babies" when I returned to my apartment by foot.
The university I study at is surround by many pineapple firms/ farms(?).
Maybe you meant 'farm' instead of 'firm'
As a result, I can see their growing process of them.
I like pineapple, but if I eat too much it hurts my tongue, so I prefer its processed product: pineapple cake!
It tastes perfect and I like it so much.
I relaxed and made a studying plan.
I scheduled winter vacation, too.
I hope I can be productive on this vacation.
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good job!
Jan. 9, 2023
Thank you so much!
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WI began my winter vacation begins!
I saw many "pineapple babies" when I returnedas I walked back to my apartment by foot.
The university I study at is surrounded by many pineapple fiarms.
As a result, I can see their growing process of them.
I like pineapple, but if I eat too much it hurts my tongue, so I prefer its processed product: pineapple cake!
It tastes perfect and I like it so much.
During my break, I relaxed and made a studying plan.
I scheduled winter vacation, tootook time off from my job as well during the holidays.
I think this is what you mean, but please let me know if it's wrong.
I hope I can be productive on this vacationduring the holidays.
Jan. 8, 2023
I scheduled winter vacation, tootook time off from my job as well during the holidays.
I mean I made a plan for winter vacation.
Jan. 8, 2023
Thank you so much!
Jan. 9, 2023
Ah, do you mean plan related to work, or personal life? For example:
- I made a plan to take time off work
- I made a plan to draw during the holidays
- I made a plan to make dinner for my parents
Jan. 9, 2023
Ah, do you mean plan related to work, or personal life? For example: - I made a plan to take time off work - I made a plan to draw during the holidays - I made a plan to make dinner for my parents
I'm a student, so plans about schoolwork maybe are related to work?
Jan. 9, 2023
Ah, do you mean plan related to work, or personal life? For example: - I made a plan to take time off work - I made a plan to draw during the holidays - I made a plan to make dinner for my parents
I'm a student, so plans about my schoolwork maybe are related to work?
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Winter vacation beginshas begun!
I saw many "pineapple babies" when I returned to my apartment by foot.
more natural: when I walked back to my apartment
The university where I study is surrounded by (many) pineapple fiarms.
“Many” isn’t wrong but is also unnecessary since “surrounded by farms” already implies that there are many of them.
As a result, I can see their growing process of them| I can watch them grow.
I like pineapple, but if I eat too much it hurts my tongue, so I prefer its processed product: pineapple cake!
To most Americans, “pineapple cake” is something like pineapple upside down cake, which is a cake with pieces of pineapple baked into its top crust: https://www.backtomysouthernroots.com/homemade-pineapple-upside-down-cake/
If you mean 鳳梨酥, I would call those “pineapple cookies” in the US.
It tastes perfect and I like it so much.
I relaxed and made a study(ing) plan.
“Study plan” is more natural.
I scheduled winter vacation, too.
This sounds like you made plans to take a winter vacation sometime in the future, which doesn’t really make sense, since you said winter vacation had already started. Maybe you mean, “I made a daily (or weekly) schedule that I plan to follow throughout this winter vacation,” or maybe “I planned some winter vacation activities,” or…?
I hope I can be productive on / during this vacation.
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I’m jealous that you get to have truly fresh pineapple. If you’ve mentioned where (in which country) you live, I’ve forgotten. When I lived in Taiwan, I used to ride my bicycle past pineapple farms on weekends. The first time I saw a pineapple plant I was shocked to realize what it was—I had naively assumed that pineapples grew on trees like other apples. 😁
Jan. 9, 2023
I like pineapple, but if I eat too much it hurts my tongue, so I prefer its processed product: pineapple cake!
I didn't know that until now, 鳳梨酥 is exactly what I mean!
Jan. 9, 2023
I scheduled winter vacation, too.
I made a daily schedule that I plan to follow throughout this winter vacation. This is what I mean.
Jan. 9, 2023
I live in Taiwan! I had the same reaction as you when I saw a pineapple plant at the first time.
Thanks for your detailed corrections!
Jan. 9, 2023
You’re welcome ☺️
The university I study at is surrounded by many pineapple fiarms.
As a result, I can see them growing process of themin real-time.
I like pineapple, but if I eat too much it hurts my tongue, so I prefer its processed product: pineapple cake!
It tastes perfect and I like it so mucha lot.
I also scheduled my winter vacation, too plans.
I hope I can be productive on this vacation.
Jan. 9, 2023
Thank you so much!
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I like pineapple, but if I eat too much it hurts my tongue, so I prefer its processed product: pineapple cake! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I like pineapple, but if I eat too much it hurts my tongue, so I prefer its processed product: pineapple cake! To most Americans, “pineapple cake” is something like pineapple upside down cake, which is a cake with pieces of pineapple baked into its top crust: https://www.backtomysouthernroots.com/homemade-pineapple-upside-down-cake/ If you mean 鳳梨酥, I would call those “pineapple cookies” in the US. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I scheduled winter vacation, too. I also scheduled my winter vacation I scheduled winter vacation, too. This sounds like you made plans to take a winter vacation sometime in the future, which doesn’t really make sense, since you said winter vacation had already started. Maybe you mean, “I made a daily (or weekly) schedule that I plan to follow throughout this winter vacation,” or maybe “I planned some winter vacation activities,” or…? I I think this is what you mean, but please let me know if it's wrong. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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