July 27, 2021
Diary
The Tokyo Olympics have started so many days ago, but I haven't watched the opening ceremony or the games... It seems that CCTV (China Central Television) enjoys exclusive rights to broadcast the Olympics in China, and we have to download a special app on our phone to watch. Of course TV is available, but it seems the my TV hasn't been used in a year. I clearly remembered that when it was announced a few years ago that skateboarding was in the Olympics, I was so excited. But I didn't watch the games these days, I only watched the clips. My favorite skaters didn't do well. During the previous Olympics, I didn't have my own phone or computer, and I enjoyed watching the games with my family. Now I have my own computer and phone, but now I don't want to watch it at all. Of course part of the reason is that I'm really busy right now and don't have time to watch. And I'm the only one at home, and watching the games alone has no atmosphere at all. This particular competition or performance is becoming less and less interesting to me.
Diary
The Tokyo Olympics have started so many days ago, but I haven't watched the opening ceremony or the games...
It seems that CCTV (China Central Television) enjoys exclusive rights to broadcast the Olympics in China, and we have to download a special app on our phone to watch it.
Of course TV is available, but it seems the my TV hasn't been used inthe transmission is available on TV, but I have not used my TV for a year now.
I clearly remembered that I was very excited when it was announced a few years ago that skateboarding was included in the Olympics, I was so excited.
But I didon't watch the games these days, and I only watched the clips.
My favorite skaters didn't do well.
During the previous Olympics, I didn't have my own phone or computer, and I enjoyed watching the games with my family.
Now I have my own computer and phone, but now I don't want to watch it at all.
Of course part of the reason is that I'm really busy right now and I don't have time to watch the games.
AndFurthermore, I'm the only one at home, and watching the games alone has nois not enjoyable due to the lack of an enjoyable atmosphere at all.
Therefore, this particular competition or /performance is becoming less and less interesting tofor me.
Feedback
You write pretty well already but you can improve your writing by including appropriate transition words like "Furthermore", "However" etc. Best of luck with your learning!
July 30, 2021
Thanks :)
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The Tokyo Olympics have started so many days ago, but I haven't watched the opening ceremony or the games... The Tokyo Olympics have started |
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It seems that CCTV (China Central Television) enjoys exclusive rights to broadcast the Olympics in China, and we have to download a special app on our phone to watch. It seems that CCTV (China Central Television) enjoys exclusive rights to broadcast the Olympics in China |
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Of course TV is available, but it seems the my TV hasn't been used in a year. Of course |
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I clearly remembered that when it was announced a few years ago that skateboarding was in the Olympics, I was so excited. I clearly remember |
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But I didn't watch the games these days, I only watched the clips. But I d |
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My favorite skaters didn't do well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During the previous Olympics, I didn't have my own phone or computer, and I enjoyed watching the games with my family. During the previous Olympics, I didn't have my own phone or computer |
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Now I have my own computer and phone, but now I don't want to watch it at all. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course part of the reason is that I'm really busy right now and don't have time to watch. Of course part of the reason is that I'm really busy right now and I don't have time to watch the games. |
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And I'm the only one at home, and watching the games alone has no atmosphere at all.
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This particular competition or performance is becoming less and less interesting to me. Therefore, this particular competition |
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