Jan. 17, 2023
Diary 1/15 & 1/16
1/15
Today I go to the library as usual. I'm so excited that I will hang out with my friend tomorrow. As a consequence, I had spent more time than usual studying for four days in order to catch up tomorrow's process. I'm so happy that I finished it! And I could let my hair down tomorrow!
1/16
In the morning,we saw a movie that called "Someday Or One Day''. It is a touching movie. I tried hard to hold back my tears at some moments because I think it's embarrassing when my friend finds that I'm crying. Nonetheless,I paid most of attention on the appearances of main-actor and main-actress. They are too charming to move my eyes from them. We visit Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch. Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibition. Although I'm not familiar with arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surrounding rejection. It's really surprised me. Consequently, I bought some merchandises, their qualities are so good. One day, I must see authentic work of these paintings!
Diary 1/15 & 1/16
1/15
Today I will go to the library as usual.
I'm so excited that I will hang out with my friend tomorrow.
As a consequence, I had spent more time than usual studying forover the past four days in order to catch up to tomorrow's process.
I'm so happy that I finished it!
And I couldThen I can let my hair down tomorrow!
1/16
In the morning, we saw a movie that called "Someday Or One Day''.
It is a touching movie.
I tried hard to hold back my tears at some moments because I think it's embarrassing when my friend finds that I'm crying.
Nonetheless, I paid most of attention ton the appearances of the main- actor and main- actress.
They awere toso charming to movehat my eyes frommoved with them.
We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch.
Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibition.
Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings.
It also hasd an amazing part section: 540 degrees surrounding re projection.
It's really surprised me.
Consequently, I bought some merchandises, because their qualities arey was so good.
One day, I must see the authentic works of these paintings!
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That sounds like a fun day. Good work!
Today I will go to the library as usual.
I'm so excited that I willo hang out with my friend tomorrow.
As a consequence, I hadve spent more time than usual by studying for four days in order to catch up tomorrow's processmake up for the study I will miss tomorrow.
'Catch up' is for when you are already behind. You cannot 'catch up' something you will miss in the future.
I'm so happy that I have finished it!
And I couldan let my hair down tomorrow!
In the morning, we saw a movie that called "Someday Or One Day''.
It is a touching movie.
I tried hard to hold back my tears at some moments because I think it's embarrassing when my friend finds that I'm crying.
Nonetheless, I paid the most of attention ton the appearances of the main- actor and main- actress.
Don't forget the word 'the'. Especially in front of 'main actor'.
They are too charming to move my eyes from them.
They are so charming that I cannot stop looking at them.
We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch.
Since I sawseeing it on Facebook, I had'd been lookeding forward to attending this exhibition.
Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings.
It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surrounding re projection.
I'm unsure what you intend to say here. I guess it is a 'projection'.
It's really surprised me.
Consequently, I bought some merchandises, because their qualities arey is so good.
'Consequently' is not a word that is used too often for casual speak. It has a slightly formal sound and fits well in a text book. A more natural phrasing when speaking or perhaps writing a journal entry would be 'So I bought some...' if you would like to state causation.
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Today I go to the library as usual. Today I will go to the library as usual. Today I will go to the library as usual. |
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As a consequence, I had spent more time than usual studying for four days in order to catch up tomorrow's process. As a consequence 'Catch up' is for when you are already behind. You cannot 'catch up' something you will miss in the future. As a consequence, I |
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I'm so happy that I finished it! I'm so happy that I have finished it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the morning,we saw a movie that called "Someday Or One Day''. In the morning In the morning, we saw a movie |
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It is a touching movie. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I tried hard to hold back my tears at some moments because I think it's embarrassing when my friend finds that I'm crying. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nonetheless,I paid most of attention on the appearances of main-actor and main-actress. Nonetheless Don't forget the word 'the'. Especially in front of 'main actor'. Nonetheless, I paid most |
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They are too charming to move my eyes from them. They are too charming to move my eyes from them. They are so charming that I cannot stop looking at them. They |
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We visit Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch. We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch. We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibit |
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Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibition. Since Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibit |
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Although I'm not familiar with arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. |
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It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surrounding rejection. It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surround I'm unsure what you intend to say here. I guess it is a 'projection'. It also ha |
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It's really surprised me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It |
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Consequently, I bought some merchandises, their qualities are so good.
'Consequently' is not a word that is used too often for casual speak. It has a slightly formal sound and fits well in a text book. A more natural phrasing when speaking or perhaps writing a journal entry would be 'So I bought some...' if you would like to state causation. Consequently, I bought some merchandise |
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One day, I must see authentic work of these paintings! One day, I must see the authentic works of these paintings! |
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