Jan. 15, 2023
Diary 1/13 & 1/14
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Today my family had spring cleaning. According to the weather forecast, it will become cold and wet on weekends, so today is the best day to wash the comforters and blankets. Although our home is not big, it still took us lots of times to clean. The main reason is that there are six people in my family, so we need to declutter the home. As a result, it will not have more and more stuffs. I really like the new look of home environment after cleaning. Even though, we are all exhausted, it is a good custom to force us tiding up.
1/14
The TOEFL OG arrived yesterday, so I arranged studying it today. Before I studied, my impression of TOEFL was that it has four parts and is difficult because of using academic papers as test contents. I didn't realize how difficult it is until I studied. Luckily, I have started preparing early and thus I have enough time digesting these complex contents. I can do it!
Diary 1/13 & 1/14
1/13
Today my family hadid spring cleaning.
According to the weather forecast, it will become cold and wet on weekends, so today iwas the best day to wash the comforters and blankets.
Although our home is not big, it still took us a lots of times to clean.
The main reason is that there are six people in my family, so we needed to declutter theour home.
As a result, it will not have more and moreless stuffs.
I really like the new look of home environmentw our home is after cleaning.
Even though, we awere all exhausted, it is a good custom to force us tiding upo tidy.
1/14
The TOEFL OG arrived yesterday, so I arranged studying for it today.
Before I studied, my impression of the TOEFL was that it has four parts and is difficult because ofit usinges academic papers as thest contents for the test.
I didn't realize how difficult it iswill be until I studied.
Luckily, I have started preparing early and thus I have enough time to digesting these complex contents.
I can do it!
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Yes, you can! Congratulations on Spring Cleaning and good work!
Today my family hadid spring cleaning.
According to the weather forecast, it will become cold and wet on the weekends, so today iwas the best day to wash the comforters and blankets.
Although our home is not big, it still took us lots of times to clean.
The main reason iwas that there are six people in my family, so we needed to declutter the home.
As a result, it will not have more and morehas less stuffs.
“Stuff” is uncountable.
I really like the new look of our home environment after cleaning.
Even though, we are all exhausted, it is a good custom to force us tidingo tidy up.
Today my family hadid spring cleaning.
According to the weather forecast, it will become cold and wet on the weekends, so today is the best day to wash the comforters and blankets.
Although our home is not big, it still took us lots of times to clean.
As a result, it will not have more and moreless stuffs.
stuff is singular, have less makes more sense than not have more and more. The meaning was clear originally
I really like the new look of our home environment after cleaning.
Even though, we are all exhausted, it is a good custom to force us tidingo tidy up.
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According to the weather forecast, it will become cold and wet on weekends, so today is the best day to wash the comforters and blankets. According to the weather forecast, it will become cold and wet on the weekend According to the weather forecast, it will become cold and wet on the weekend According to the weather forecast, it will become cold and wet on weekends, so today |
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Although our home is not big, it still took us lots of times to clean. Although our home is not big, it still took us lots of time This sentence has been marked as perfect! Although our home is not big, it still took us a lot |
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The main reason is that there are six people in my family, so we need to declutter the home. The main reason The main reason is that there are six people in my family, so we needed to declutter |
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I really like the new look of home environment after cleaning. I really like the new look of our home environment after cleaning. I really like the new look of our home environment after cleaning. I really like the new look of ho |
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Even though, we are all exhausted, it is a good custom to force us tiding up. Even though, we are all exhausted, it is a good custom to force us t Even though Even though |
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The TOEFL OG arrived yesterday, so I arranged studying it today. The TOEFL OG arrived yesterday, so I arranged studying for it today. |
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Before I studied, my impression of TOEFL was that it has four parts and is difficult because of using academic papers as test contents. Before I studied, my impression of the TOEFL was that it has four parts and is difficult because |
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I didn't realize how difficult it is until I studied. I didn't realize how difficult it |
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Luckily, I have started preparing early and thus I have enough time digesting these complex contents. Luckily, I have started preparing early and thus I have enough time to digest |
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I can do it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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