June 10, 2023
Diary 10.6.2023
Today is another normal day to relax. Since starting my summer vacation, I have always had free time to do many things. After waking up, having breakfast, doing leisure activities, I do some homework to prepare for an extra course, play games, watch some films... In the afternoon, I go swimming because it's good for my health and help me to cool down my body.
After waking up, having breakfast, and doing leisure activities, I do some homework to prepare for an extra course, play games, watch some films...
In the afternoon, I go swimming because it's good for my health and helps me to cool down my body.
Diary 10.6.2023
Today is another normal day to relax.
Since starting my summer vacation, I have always had free time to do many things.
By adding 'always' it seems like you are including more time than the summer vacation, but it is clear you are only talking about during this particular summer vacation.
After waking up, having breakfast, and doing leisure activities, I do some homework to prepare for an extra course,. I also play games, and watch some films...
In the afternoon, I go swimming because it's good for my health and helps me to cool down my body.
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Great job! Only a few minor suggestions.
June 10, 2023
Thanks for your correction ! :D
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Today is another normal day to relax. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since starting my summer vacation, I have always had free time to do many things. Since starting my summer vacation, I have By adding 'always' it seems like you are including more time than the summer vacation, but it is clear you are only talking about during this particular summer vacation. |
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After waking up, having breakfast, doing leisure activities, I do some homework to prepare for an extra course, play games, watch some films... After waking up, having breakfast, and doing leisure activities, I do some homework to prepare for an extra course After waking up, having breakfast |
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In the afternoon, I go swimming because it's good for my health and help me to cool down my body. In the afternoon, I go swimming because it's good for my health and helps me to cool down my body. In the afternoon, I go swimming because it's good for my health and helps me to cool down my body. |
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