Feb. 14, 2022
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I planned to get up at 7:45 am today.
But I don't until 8:15 am, for a winter vacation.
I boiled a bowl of congee (contains various grains) left yesterday and an egg for my breakfast.
After that, I brushed my teeth, washed my face, and went to the bathroom.
I started learning English at 10 am, focusing on listening and business oral English.
今天我本来计划7点45起床，
但实际上，我又在床上赖了半小时，毕竟今天不上班。
我热了一下昨天剩的粥（五谷杂粮），并煮了一个鸡蛋，这些就是我的早餐。
随后我jiuqu1刷牙，洗脸，上厕所。
10点之后，我开始学习英语，重点练习听力和商务口语。
Diary 1-1
I planned to get up at 7:45 am today.
ButHowever, I doidn't until 8:15 am, for abecause of winter vacation.
Many frown upon starting a sentence with a conjuction.
I boiled a bowl of congee (contains various grains) left over from yesterday, and an egg for my breakfast.
Remember to use commas.
After that, I brushed my teeth, washed my face, and went to the bathroom.
I started learnstudying English at 10 am, focusing on listening and business oral English.
You didn't just start learning english, you have already studied some.
Feb. 15, 2022
thanks for your correction！
Feb. 15, 2022
ButHowever, I doidn't until 8:15 am, for abecause of winter vacation.
I see. Good Suggestion! Maybe it could be correctted like this"I, however, didn't until 8:15 am, because of winter vacation."
Feb. 15, 2022
I started learnstudying English at 10 am, focusing on listening and business oral English.
Thanks, I benefited a lot.
Feb. 15, 2022
Your Welcome! Happy to help
Diary 1-1
I planned to get up at 7:45 am today.
But I doidn't until 8:15 am, for a because of winter vacation.
I boiled a bowl of congee (which contains various grains) leftover from yesterday and an egg for my breakfast.
After that, I brushed my teeth, washed my face, and went to the bathroom.
I started learnstudying English at 10 am, focusing on listening and business oral English.
I started learning English at 10am makes it sound like that's the very first time you studied English in your life.
Diary 1-1
I planned to get up at 7:45 am today.
But I doidn't until 8:15 am, for abecause of winter vacation.
I boiled a bowl of congee (contains various grains) left over from yesterday and an egg for my breakfast.
You could also say "leftover congee."
After that, I brushed my teeth, washed my face, and went to the bathroom.
I started learnstudying English at 10 am, focusing on listening and business oral Englishspeaking.
"Studying" sounds more like something you've been doing for a while, and using "English" twice in one sentence is a little redundant.
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Good job!
Feb. 15, 2022
thanks for your encouragement！
Feb. 15, 2022
I started learnstudying English at 10 am, focusing on listening and business oral Englishspeaking.
Thanks! I benefited a lot.
Feb. 15, 2022
I boiled a bowl of congee (contains various grains) left over from yesterday and an egg for my breakfast.
Great! That's concise.
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I boiled a bowl of congee (contains various grains) left yesterday and an egg for my breakfast. I boiled a bowl of congee (contains various grains) left over from yesterday and an egg for my breakfast. You could also say "leftover congee." I boiled a bowl of congee (which contains various grains) leftover from yesterday and an egg for I boiled a bowl of congee (contains various grains) left over from yesterday, and an egg for Remember to use commas. |
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I started learning English at 10 am, focusing on listening and business oral English. I started "Studying" sounds more like something you've been doing for a while, and using "English" twice in one sentence is a little redundant. I started I started learning English at 10am makes it sound like that's the very first time you studied English in your life. I started You didn't just start learning english, you have already studied some. |
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