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AndresBTA

Dec. 9, 2025

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Dialogue between friends

-Hi Sandra, what would You like to do?

-Hi Michelle, I'd like to go jogging in the park, it's a long time that we don't doing exercise.

Sandra: it's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog.

Michelle: great! Tony he's very quiet , I think that He'll got a good time and be good company.

Sandra: what else will we need to bring?

Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones.

Sandra: oh, by the way let's take some oranges and bananas.

Michelle: okie, so let's go , the day it's beautiful.

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Dialogue between friends

-Hi, Sandra, w! What would Yyou like to do?

That was almost perfect, it just needed an adjustment of punctuation.

Hi, Michelle,! I'd like to go jogging in the park, it's a long timwe that we don't doing exercisven't been exercising for a long time.

I understood what you were trying to say, but it didn't sound natural.

Sandra: iThat's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog.?

Again, just some phrasing and punctuation.

Michelle: gGreat!

Tony he'is very quiet , I think that He'll gothe will have a good time and be good company.

Sandra: wWhat else will we need to bring?

Just remember to capitalize the beginning of a sentence!

Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones.

Sandra: oOh, by the way let's take some oranges and bananas.

This sounds more natural.

Michelle: okie, soOkay, let's go , the day it's beautiful.

Feedback

I understood everything you were trying to express, and the corrections were mostly to make more natural phrasing and sentence construction.

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AndresBTA

Dec. 15, 2025

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Ok thanks.

-Hi Sandra, what would Yyou like to do?

Hi Michelle, I'd like to go jogging in the park, i. It's been a long time that we don't doingsince we've exercised.

Sandra: iThat's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog., Tony?

Michelle: gGreat!

Tony he'is very quiet , I think that Hhe'll gothave a good time and be good company.

Sandra: wWhat else will we need to bring?

Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones.

Sandra: oOh, by the way, let's take some oranges and bananas.

A more natural way to write this would be "Oh, let's take some oranges and bananas too."

Michelle: oOkie, so let's go , the day it'ss so beautiful.

"Okie" is correct, though it's usually used more in the colloquial phrase "okie dokie". "OK" is another option that is more common.

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AndresBTA

Dec. 15, 2025

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Ok. Understood, Tank you

Dialogue between friends


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

-Hi Sandra, what would You like to do?


-Hi Sandra, what would Yyou like to do?

-Hi, Sandra, w! What would Yyou like to do?

That was almost perfect, it just needed an adjustment of punctuation.

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Hi Michelle, I'd like to go jogging in the park, it's a long time that we don't doing exercise.


Hi Michelle, I'd like to go jogging in the park, i. It's been a long time that we don't doingsince we've exercised.

Hi, Michelle,! I'd like to go jogging in the park, it's a long timwe that we don't doing exercisven't been exercising for a long time.

I understood what you were trying to say, but it didn't sound natural.

Sandra: it's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog.


Sandra: iThat's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog., Tony?

Sandra: iThat's a good idea, how about if we take Tony, my dog.?

Again, just some phrasing and punctuation.

Michelle: great!


Michelle: gGreat!

Michelle: gGreat!

Tony he's very quiet , I think that He'll got a good time and be good company.


Tony he'is very quiet , I think that Hhe'll gothave a good time and be good company.

Tony he'is very quiet , I think that He'll gothe will have a good time and be good company.

Sandra: what else will we need to bring?


Sandra: wWhat else will we need to bring?

Sandra: wWhat else will we need to bring?

Just remember to capitalize the beginning of a sentence!

Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones.


Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones.

Michelle: I think we'll need plenty of water, sunscreen, and ours phones.

Sandra: oh, by the way let's take some oranges and bananas.


Sandra: oOh, by the way, let's take some oranges and bananas.

A more natural way to write this would be "Oh, let's take some oranges and bananas too."

Sandra: oOh, by the way let's take some oranges and bananas.

This sounds more natural.

Michelle: okie, so let's go , the day it's beautiful.


Michelle: oOkie, so let's go , the day it'ss so beautiful.

"Okie" is correct, though it's usually used more in the colloquial phrase "okie dokie". "OK" is another option that is more common.

Michelle: okie, soOkay, let's go , the day it's beautiful.

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