Dec. 8, 2020
Devil's Pass
Dyatlov Pass incident became rather well-known a few years ago, especially after Renny Harlin’s film released in 2013. Although the movie is kind of a black comedy and gives the most fantastic and crazy interpretation of the events, it caused a surge of interest in Dyatlov Pass in the world. The Internet has also played a role, although the English article on Wikipedia is very incomplete and gives nothing more than an official version that ignores inconvenient facts. In Russia, amateur researchers have never stopped investigating the incident. There are some gurus among them who have collected a lot of materials, published their books on the subject, and have become leaders of adherents one or another version. Enthusiasts still break spears on forums, shoot videos with their own explanation of the events and put them online. A number of articles in the printed media and TV programs forced the authorities to announce a new investigation in 2018. The result was predictable, the findings of 1959 were confirmed and the official version remains the most evasive "natural" theory, which is far from explaining the mystery.
There was another similar case, much less known, which certainly cannot be explained by avalanching. This case is strikingly similar to the tragedy of Dyatlov's group. The same escape from the camping in the middle of the night without supplies and clothing, the same irrational behavior of the tourists and their unexplainable serious injuries and then death. However, this event is separated from the Dyatlov Pass by more than 3 decades and almost 3 thousand kilometers, and most importantly, there is one survivor in this case. I’m going to cover it in my next journal.
В последние годы история гибели группы Дятлова стала довольно широко известна, отчасти благодаря фильму Renny Harlin 2013 г. Хотя фильм – скорее черная комедия и дает самую парадоксальную и нелепую трактовку событий, но тем не менее он вызвал всплеск интереса к этой теме в мире. Интернет тоже сыграл свою роль, правда англоязычная статья в Википедии очень неполная и сводится к официальному объяснению, которое попросту отметает неудобные факты. В России же самодеятельные исследователи никогда не переставали изучать эту тему. Есть гуру, собравшие обширные материалы и издавшие по ним книги, с развитием Интернета ставшие лидерами течений, отстаивающих ту или иную версию. На специализированных форумах до сих пор ломаются копья, а энтузиасты выкладывают захватывающие видео со своим объяснением событий. Ряд статей в прессе и телевизионных передач вынудили власти в 2018 г. объявить о начале повторного расследования. В результате, разумеется, были подтверждены выводы 1959 года и официальной версией остается самая безобидная «природная» теория, которая далеко не объясняет загадку.
Есть и другой подобный случай, который уж точно никак не объяснить сходом лавины. Этот случай удивительно похож на трагедию группы Дятлова. То же бегство среди ночи с места ночевки, босиком, без припасов и одежды, то же нелогичное поведение участников и их необъяснимые тяжелые ранения и гибель. Правда, его отделяют от перевала Дятлова 3 десятилетия и почти 3 тысячи километров, а главное, имеется один выживший. Об этом случае я хочу рассказать в своем следующем журнале.
Devil's Pass
The Dyatlov Pass incident became rather well-known a few years ago, especially after Renny Harlin’s film, released in 2013.
Although the movie is kind of a black comedy and gives the most fantastic and, crazy interpretation of the events, it caused a surge of interest in the Dyatlov Pass inaround the world.
The "and" in "fantastic and crazy", can be omitted and replaced with a comma here. I think it also can help add some emphasis.
The Internet has also played a role, although the English article on Wikipedia is very incomplete and gives nothing more than an official version that ignores inconvenient facts.
In Russia, amateur researchers have never stopped investigating the incident.
There are some gurus among them who have collected a lot of materials, published their own books on the subject, and have become leaders of adherents one version or another version.
I'm not sure if this is just a spoken thing or not, but often times "who have" becomes "who've".
Enthusiasts still break spears on forums, shooting videos with their own explanation of the events and putting them online.
I'm not sure what you mean by "still break spears".
A number of articles in the printed media and TV programs forced the authorities to announce a new investigation in 2018.
I don't think "printed" is needed here because "articles" and "media" already give the reader an indication that some of the material is printed.
The result was predictable, the findings of 1959 were confirmed and the official version remains the most evasive "natural" theory, which is the most evasive and is far from explaining the mystery.
There was another, similar case, much less known, which certainly cannot be explained by an avalanchinge.
"Cannot" is often written as "can't".
This case is strikingly similar to the tragedy of the Dyatlov's g Group.
The same escape from the camping in the middle of the night without supplies and clothing, the same irrational behavior of the tourists, and their unexplainable serious injuries and then death.
However, this event is separated from the Dyatlov Pass by more than 3three decades and almost 3three thousand kilometers, and most importantly, there is one survivor in this case.
If you wanted to use numbers instead of spelling it out, you have to say "3 decades and almost 3 000 kilometers". It's one of those quirky things about written English.
I’m going to cover it in my next journal.
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Devil's Pass
The Dyatlov Pass incident became rather well-known a few years ago, especially after Renny Harlin’s film released in 2013.
Although the movie is kind of a black comedy and gives the most fantastic and crazy interpretation of the events, it caused a surge of interest in Dyatlov Pass in the world.
The Internet has also played a role, although the English article on Wikipedia is very incomplete and gives nothing more than an official version that ignores inconvenient facts.
In Russia, amateur researchers have never stopped investigating the incident.
There are some gurus among them who have collected a lot of materials, published their books on the subject, and have become leaders of the adherents one or anoto their respective versions.
Enthusiasts still break spears on forums, shooand post videos with their own explanation of the events and put them online.
A number of articles in the printed media and TV programs forced the authorities to announce a new investigation in 2018.
The result was predictable,: the findings of 1959 were confirmed and the official version remains the most evasivewidespread "natural" theory, which is far from explaining the mystery.
There was another similar case, much less known, which certainly cannot be explained by an avalanchinge.
This case is strikingly similar to the tragedy of Dyatlov's group.
The same escape from the camping in the middle of the night without supplies and clothing, the same irrational behavior of the tourists and their unexplainable serious injuries and then, finally, death.
However, this event is separated from the Dyatlov Pass by more than 3three decades and almost 3three thousand kilometers, a. And, most importantly, there is one survivor in this case.
I’m going to cover it in my next journal.
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Dyatlov Pass incident became rather well-known a few years ago, especially after Renny Harlin’s film released in 2013. The Dyatlov Pass incident became rather well-known a few years ago, especially after Renny Harlin’s film released in 2013. The Dyatlov Pass incident became rather well-known a few years ago, especially after Renny Harlin’s film, released in 2013. |
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Although the movie is kind of a black comedy and gives the most fantastic and crazy interpretation of the events, it caused a surge of interest in Dyatlov Pass in the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Although the movie is kind of a black comedy and gives the most fantastic The "and" in "fantastic and crazy", can be omitted and replaced with a comma here. I think it also can help add some emphasis. |
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The Internet has also played a role, although the English article on Wikipedia is very incomplete and gives nothing more than an official version that ignores inconvenient facts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In Russia, amateur researchers have never stopped investigating the incident. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are some gurus among them who have collected a lot of materials, published their books on the subject, and have become leaders of adherents one or another version. There are some gurus among them who have collected a lot of materials, published their books on the subject, and have become leaders of the adherents There are some gurus among them who have collected a lot of material I'm not sure if this is just a spoken thing or not, but often times "who have" becomes "who've". |
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Enthusiasts still break spears on forums, shoot videos with their own explanation of the events and put them online. Enthusiasts still break spears on forums, Enthusiasts still break spears on forums, shooting videos with their own explanation of the events and putting them online. I'm not sure what you mean by "still break spears". |
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A number of articles in the printed media and TV programs forced the authorities to announce a new investigation in 2018. This sentence has been marked as perfect! A number of articles in the I don't think "printed" is needed here because "articles" and "media" already give the reader an indication that some of the material is printed. |
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The result was predictable, the findings of 1959 were confirmed and the official version remains the most evasive "natural" theory, which is far from explaining the mystery. The result was predictable The result was predictable, the findings of 1959 were confirmed and the official version remains the |
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There was another similar case, much less known, which certainly cannot be explained by avalanching. There was another similar case, much less known, which certainly cannot be explained by an avalanch There was another, similar case, much less known, which certainly cannot be explained by an avalanch "Cannot" is often written as "can't". |
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This case is strikingly similar to the tragedy of Dyatlov's group. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This case is strikingly similar to the tragedy of the Dyatlov |
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However, this event is separated from the Dyatlov Pass by more than 3 decades and almost 3 thousand kilometers, and most importantly, there is one survivor in this case. However, this event is separated from the Dyatlov Pass by more than However, this event is separated from the Dyatlov Pass by more than If you wanted to use numbers instead of spelling it out, you have to say "3 decades and almost 3 000 kilometers". It's one of those quirky things about written English. |
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I’m going to cover it in my next journal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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