Sept. 12, 2023
Dessert days
Latest days, I'm very interested in desserts!
I don't konw why, maybe autumn has arrived and my body need some sugar and fat. hahaha. I have bought so many cakes、breads and so on, even the milk tea that I rarely bought because it's taste so strange and so sweet to me. Oh,it's really so weird.
By the way,the soymilk tastes good :).
The moon festival is comming soon,so it's time to buy some mooncakes. This time ,I'm going to try a kind of new mooncakes——Milky mooncakes ——which skin maked by milk. Another day of sweetness~
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A very small man can cast a very large shadow.
Reminds me of a song 《Living in the shadows》,worth to listen.
Latest days, I'mly, I've been very interested in desserts!.
The moon festival is comming up soon, so it's timeI'll need to buy some mooncakes.
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Latest days, I'mly, I've been very interested in desserts!
I don't konow why, mayb. Maybe it is because autumn has arrived and my body needs some sugar and fat.
hHahaha.
I have bought so many cakes、, breads and so on, even the. I have even bought milk tea that, which I rarely boughtuy because it's tastes so strange (/interesting) and so sweet to me.
Oh, it's really so weird.
By the way, the soymilk (milk tea?) tastes good :).
If you were talking about soy milk, omit "the" as in: "By the way, soymilk tastes good :)."
The moon festival is comming soon, so it's time to buy some mooncakes.
I had eaten one yesterday! What kind of mooncake is your favorite :)?
This time , I'm going to try a new kind of new mooncakes——M, milky mooncakes ——, in which the skin maked by(/crust) is made of (/using) milk.
Another day of sweetness~
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A very small man can cast a very large shadow.
Another day of sweetness~ --> Yes, :)!
RThat sentence reminds me of a song 《Living in the sShadows》,. It is worth tohe listen.
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Nice job!
Sept. 13, 2023
By the way, the soymilk (milk tea?) tastes good :).
it's a kind of milk tea including soy milk powder(maybe this word:>)
Sept. 13, 2023
The moon festival is comming soon, so it's time to buy some mooncakes.
Wow, which one do u eat ?
I like a lot, such as Traditional puff pastry five-kernel mooncake, Carbon roast coffee mooncake, flowing custard mooncake, etc :）
Pity that can't send photos, or I'll show u.
Sept. 13, 2023
This time , I'm going to try a new kind of new mooncakes——M, milky mooncakes ——, in which the skin maked by(/crust) is made of (/using) milk.
1. in which the skin crust using milk. [crust or crusted ?]
2. in which the skin is made of milk.
Sept. 13, 2023
ありがとうございます～
Sept. 13, 2023
1. in which the skin crust using milk. [crust or crusted ?] 2. in which the skin is made of milk.
I meant for the "/" to be like "or", so #2 is correct^^!
Sept. 13, 2023
Wow, which one do u eat ? I like a lot, such as Traditional puff pastry five-kernel mooncake, Carbon roast coffee mooncake, flowing custard mooncake, etc :） Pity that can't send photos, or I'll show u.
I haven't tried many kinds but I like the ones with salted egg yolk + red bean or white lotus paste! These all look sooo good, thanks for sharing :)
Sept. 13, 2023
I meant for the "/" to be like "or", so #2 is correct^^!
Oh!
in which the crust is using milk.
hhh^^
Sept. 13, 2023
Oh! in which the crust is using milk. hhh^^
Ahh, my apologies! The other way would be: in which the crust (or skin) is made by using milk. I had forgotten to type "by".
Sept. 13, 2023
I haven't tried many kinds but I like the ones with salted egg yolk + red bean or white lotus paste! These all look sooo good, thanks for sharing :)
egg yolk paste is so good!
u r welcome. ^^
Sept. 13, 2023
Ahh, my apologies! The other way would be: in which the crust (or skin) is made by using milk. I had forgotten to type "by".
hhhh, my apologies too ^^
Dessert days
Latest days, I'mRecently, I've been very interested in desserts!
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Lately, I've been very interested in desserts!
I don't konow why, maybe autumn has arrived and my body need some sugar and fat.
Great!
hHahaha.
I have bought so many cakes、, breads and so on, even the milk tea that I rarely bought because it's taste so strange and so sweet to me.
Very well written! The ''so'' only needs to be written once. If I were to say I am so hot and sweaty, it is known that I am so sweaty as well as so hot!
Oh, it's really so weird.
By the way, the soymilk tastes good :).
The moon festival is comming soon, so it's time to buy some mooncakes.
This time , I'm going to try a kind of new mooncakes—— - Milky mooncakes ——- which has skin maked byde of milk.
Skin made by milk would also work here.
Another day of sweetness~ Daily sentence: A very small man can cast a very large shadow.
Reminds me of a song 《Living in the shadows》, worth toa listen.
''which is worth listening to'' or ''which is worth a listen'' also work and flow slightly better for me.
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Fantastic writing. Your English is quite good, and also you write in a poetic way which is enjoyable to read.
When using commas ',' - make sure you leave a space after it, not before it.
''Like, this.'' but not ''Like ,this.''
Good luck!
Sept. 13, 2023
I have bought so many cakes、, breads and so on, even the milk tea that I rarely bought because it's taste so strange and so sweet to me.
Oh, it should be '...too sweet to me.'
Is this right ?
Sept. 13, 2023
Thank u~
I feel that u might be an artistic person :)
Sept. 13, 2023
Reminds me of a song 《Living in the shadows》, worth toa listen.
How about "It's worth to listen" ?
Sept. 13, 2023
How about "It's worth to listen" ?
That doesn't quite work.
Here are some alternatives:
"It's worth having a listen to''
''It's worth listening to it''
''You should give it a listen'' (This is quite casual)
Sept. 13, 2023
Oh, it should be '...too sweet to me.' Is this right ?
Yes, that would work. I think a different, more common style would be "too sweet FOR me''
But also, in your original sentence, you say that you rarely bought the tea because it tastes so strange and sweet to you, so you have already successfully said this message correctly.
Keep up the good work!
Sept. 13, 2023
Yes, that would work. I think a different, more common style would be "too sweet FOR me'' But also, in your original sentence, you say that you rarely bought the tea because it tastes so strange and sweet to you, so you have already successfully said this message correctly. Keep up the good work!
okay, I see!
Thank u~
Sept. 13, 2023
That doesn't quite work. Here are some alternatives: "It's worth having a listen to'' ''It's worth listening to it'' ''You should give it a listen'' (This is quite casual)
okay, what about "be worthy.."
"It's worthy of listening"
“It's worthy to be listened”
This confused me
Sept. 13, 2023
okay, what about "be worthy.." "It's worthy of listening" “It's worthy to be listened” This confused me
That is almost perfect, you can write ''It's worthy of a listen'' or ''It's worthy to be listened to'' or ''It's worth a listen''
Listen is a verb, so you can listen *to* something. I can listen *to* the music playing.
If someone asks you if you heard the song, you can say ''Yes! I have listened *to* it"
I hope this helps, please feel free to ask more.
Sept. 13, 2023
yeah, I see!
Thank u so much ~ ^^
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