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Aug. 11, 2020

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deserves to be delivered

I mentioned the verb "to deserve to" in the last post.
Today, I'd like to talk about my favorite stories from Japanese animation "Violet Evergarden" in which that verb is used.
The main character is 14-years-old girl named Violet who lost her both arms and feelings by harrowing war experience.
She learn to figure out the person's true feeling and express it on paper through writing on behalf of someone using a typewriter.
You couldn't help crying at outstanding stories and beautiful scene (image?).
I feel that English-dubbed version is more comfortable with the worldview of the stories than Japanese original version. And over all, the verb "to deserve to" is used at important scenes.
For example, the old postman told Violet as following.
"After all, each one of them contains someone's precious feelings. Every letter deserves to be delivered."
Also, episode 10 including following lines is famous for an emotional story.
"There is no such thing as a letter that doesn't deserve to be delivered."
I'd like to have more people watch it.


前回の日記で、”deserve to”というお気に入りのフレーズについて触れた。
今日は、このフレーズが使われた私の大好きなアニメ「ヴァイオレット・エヴァーガーデン」について話したいと思う。
戦争で両腕と感情を失った少女ヴァイオレットが、手紙の代筆屋として働く過程で人を想う気持ちを学び成長していくストーリーである。毎話、涙なしに見ることは難しいほど心を揺さぶられる脚本と映像の美しさが特徴だ。
私は日本語と英語どちらも視聴したが、英語版の方が世界観とマッチしており表現が繊細であると感じた。そして、重要なシーンにはやはり”deserve to”というフレーズが使われている。
例えば、とある老年の配達員が主人公に伝える以下のセリフがある。
"After all, each one of them contains someone's precious feelings. Every letter deserves to be delivered."
「どれ一つ取ったって、誰かの大切な思いだからな。届かなくていい手紙なんてないんだ。」
また、以下のセリフを含む第10話はあまりに有名である。
"There is no such thing as a letter that doesn't deserve to be delivered."
「届かなくていい手紙なんて一つもないんですよ。」
Netflixには英語版もあるので、一人でも多くの人に観て欲しい。

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I mentioned the verb "to deserve to" in the last post.

The verb is only "to deserve", though the phrase can be "deserve to"

Today, I'd like to talk about my favorite storieparts from the Japanese animation "Violet Evergarden", in which that verb is used.

"Stories" sounds a little unnatural here and in some other places, but since I haven't seen the anime I'm not sure how best to phrase it.

The main character is 14-years-old girl named Violet who lost her both of her arms and her feelings byin a harrowing war experience.

She learned to figure out the person's true feelings and express ithem on paper through writing on behalf of someone using a typewriter.

I'm not sure who is using the typewriter here, but it would change the sentence.

You couldn't help crying at the outstanding stories and beautiful scene (image? )ry.

"Story-telling" could work here.

And over all, throughout, the verb "to deserve to" is used at important scenes.

For example, the old postman told Violet asthe following.:

Also, episode 10 includinges the following lines, and is famous for an particularly emotional story.

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Good work. I have always wanted to watch that show!

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tommy

Aug. 12, 2020

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Thank you for your detailed correction. You can watch English-dubbed version of them on Netflix!

The main character is a 14- years- old girl named Violet who lost her both her arms and her feelings byin a harrowing war experience.

"After all, each one of them contains someone's precious feelings.

Every letter deserves to be delivered.

"There is no such thing as a letter that doesn't deserve to be delivered.

Feedback

Overall, I though it was pretty good and interesting. Good job!

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tommy

Aug. 13, 2020

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Thank you!

deserves to be delivered


I mentioned the verb "to deserve to" in the last post.


I mentioned the verb "to deserve to" in the last post.

The verb is only "to deserve", though the phrase can be "deserve to"

Today, I'd like to talk about my favorite stories from Japanese animation "Violet Evergarden" in which that verb is used.


Today, I'd like to talk about my favorite storieparts from the Japanese animation "Violet Evergarden", in which that verb is used.

"Stories" sounds a little unnatural here and in some other places, but since I haven't seen the anime I'm not sure how best to phrase it.

The main character is 14-years-old girl named Violet who lost her both arms and feelings by harrowing war experience.


The main character is a 14- years- old girl named Violet who lost her both her arms and her feelings byin a harrowing war experience.

The main character is 14-years-old girl named Violet who lost her both of her arms and her feelings byin a harrowing war experience.

She learn to figure out the person's true feeling and express it on paper through writing on behalf of someone using a typewriter.


She learned to figure out the person's true feelings and express ithem on paper through writing on behalf of someone using a typewriter.

I'm not sure who is using the typewriter here, but it would change the sentence.

You couldn't help crying at outstanding stories and beautiful scene (image? ).


You couldn't help crying at the outstanding stories and beautiful scene (image? )ry.

"Story-telling" could work here.

I feel that English-dubbed version is more comfortable with the worldview of the stories than Japanese original version.


And over all, the verb "to deserve to" is used at important scenes.


And over all, throughout, the verb "to deserve to" is used at important scenes.

For example, the old postman told Violet as following.


For example, the old postman told Violet asthe following.:

"After all, each one of them contains someone's precious feelings.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every letter deserves to be delivered.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"


Also, episode 10 including following lines is famous for an emotional story.


Also, episode 10 includinges the following lines, and is famous for an particularly emotional story.

"There is no such thing as a letter that doesn't deserve to be delivered.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"


I'd like to have more people watch it.


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