Sept. 9, 2020
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I am water deficient all year round. If I don't make a conscious effort to drink water, there are times when I don't drink 500ml of water a day. It's not until the headache gets worse that I realize this. So I decided to make a liter of flavor tea at work every morning. I'm going to drink it all before I get home and end my perennial water shortage!
わたしは一年中水分不足だ。ちゃんと意識して水分を摂らないと、1日500mlも水を飲んでない時もある。頭痛がひどくなってから、気付くのだ。だから私は会社で毎朝1Lのお茶を作ることにした。帰宅するまでに全部飲みきり、万年水不足を解消するぞ！
Desert
I am water deficientdehydrated all year round.
Your sentence conveyed the meaning perfectly, but the specific word you're looking for here is "dehydrated"
If I don't make a conscious effort to drink water, there are times when I don't even drink 500ml of water a day.
Adding "even" emphasizes that you're usually 500ml and below
It's not until the headache gets worse that I realize this.
So I decided to make a liter of flavored tea at work every morning.
I'm going to drink it all before I get home and end my perennialconstant water shortage!
I've never seen perennial used this way -- other users please correct me if I'm wrong :)
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Nice job! Thanks for reminding me to drink water :)
Sept. 9, 2020
I'm going to drink it all before I get home and end my perennialconstant water shortage!
I think perennial is ok. I can find some examples online of it being used to describe things besides flowers (some sentences on this page https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/perennial). It is an unusual choice but does add character to the sentence.
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I am water deficient all year round. I am Your sentence conveyed the meaning perfectly, but the specific word you're looking for here is "dehydrated" |
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If I don't make a conscious effort to drink water, there are times when I don't drink 500ml of water a day. If I don't make a conscious effort to drink water, there are times when I don't even drink 500ml of water a day. Adding "even" emphasizes that you're usually 500ml and below |
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It's not until the headache gets worse that I realize this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I decided to make a liter of flavor tea at work every morning. So I decided to make a liter of flavored tea at work every morning. |
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I'm going to drink it all before I get home and end my perennial water shortage! I'm going to drink it all before I get home and end my I've never seen perennial used this way -- other users please correct me if I'm wrong :) |
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