April 1, 2022
Description of my house: The exterior
My house is a little one. It's an alley house. My neighborhood is compound of a few blocks (not more than six) with a lot of houses inside them. The only roads suitable for motor vehicles are the ones that surround the blocks, for inside them all you can find is alleys by which the people move on foot or by bicycle. The alleys are not too tight. Between houses there were enough space for constructing one lane streets, still they decided to put a sort of green zone in the middle of every alley, on which the people have sown different types of plants. One can even run into trees bigger than the houses they are in between.
When describing my house to my friends, the first thing I say to differentiate it front the others is that there is a medium-size pink-flowered tree in front of it. The tree is probably the only special thing about it, in other respects it is just another old one storey house.
Nevertheless, sometimes at the sunset, while some cat, or a herd of them, horses around over its clay tile roof, and the sun light ricochets off its pure white facade with tiny windows, my house seems charming.
It's an alley house.
The alleys are not too tight.
Between houses there wereas enough space for constructing one lane streets, stillbut they decided to put a sort of green zone in the middle of every alley, on which the people have sown different types of plants.
to me were sounds wrong and was sounds right but I'm not sure why, sorry. I replaced still with but- there could have been streets BUT there are plants instead. To me this makes a better flowing sentence
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Your house sounds nice, I'm jealous of the plants. The tree out the front sounds particularly pretty.
Description of my house: The exterior
Adding "A" in front of "Description" isn't required but might make the title better
My house is a little one.
It's an alley house.
My neighbourhood is compoundmade up of a few blocks (not more than six) with a lot of houses inside them.
The only roads suitable for motor vehicles are the ones that surround the blocks, as for inside them, all you can find isare alleys by which the people move on foot or by biwhere people walk or cycle.
Saying "cars" would be more natural than "motor vehicles"
The alleys are not too tightnarrow.
"Tight" is normally used to describe clothes being too small.
Between houses, there wereas enough space for constructing one -lane streets, still. However, they decided to put asome sort of green zone in the middle of every alley, on which thwhere people have sown different types of plants.
OneYou can even run into trees that are bigger than the houses they are in between.
We don't really use "one" in English, we tend to use "you"
Adding "that are" clarifies that the trees are bigger than the houses
When describing my house to my friends, the first thing I say to differentiate it front the others is that there is a medium-size pink-flowered tree in front of it.
The tree is probably the only special thing about it. But, in other respects, it is just another old one storey house.
Nevertheless, sometimes atwhen the sun sets, while some cat, or a herdgroup of them, horses around over itsthe clay tile roof, and the sun light ricochets off its pure white facade with tiny windows, my house seems charming.
I am not sure what you mean by "horses around"
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Really good writing, your English is amazing!
April 3, 2022
Thank you for your corrections and kind commentary. They'll help me a lot!
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Description of my house: The exterior Description of my house: The exterior Adding "A" in front of "Description" isn't required but might make the title better |
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My house is a little one. My house is |
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It's an alley house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My neighborhood is compound of a few blocks (not more than six) with a lot of houses inside them. My neighbourhood is |
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The only roads suitable for motor vehicles are the ones that surround the blocks, for inside them all you can find is alleys by which the people move on foot or by bicycle. The only roads suitable for motor vehicles are the ones that surround the blocks, as for inside them, all you can find Saying "cars" would be more natural than "motor vehicles" |
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The alleys are not too tight. The alleys are not too "Tight" is normally used to describe clothes being too small. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Between houses there were enough space for constructing one lane streets, still they decided to put a sort of green zone in the middle of every alley, on which the people have sown different types of plants. Between houses, there w Between houses there w to me were sounds wrong and was sounds right but I'm not sure why, sorry. I replaced still with but- there could have been streets BUT there are plants instead. To me this makes a better flowing sentence |
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One can even run into trees bigger than the houses they are in between.
We don't really use "one" in English, we tend to use "you" Adding "that are" clarifies that the trees are bigger than the houses |
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When describing my house to my friends, the first thing I say to differentiate it front the others is that there is a medium-size pink-flowered tree in front of it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The tree is probably the only special thing about it, in other respects it is just another old one storey house. The tree is probably the only special thing about it. But, in other respects, it is just another old one storey house. |
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Nevertheless, sometimes at the sunset, while some cat, or a herd of them, horses around over its clay tile roof, and the sun light ricochets off its pure white facade with tiny windows, my house seems charming. Nevertheless, sometimes I am not sure what you mean by "horses around" |
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