Sept. 12, 2024
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When I first met Shestopal Oleg, who was an ordinary teacher, rather famous between japanese learners of my city, I wasn't quite interested.
Oleg looks as though he's a young man in his 20s. However, later I found out that he's a 37-year-old man. He is a well-builed, has a hooked nose, a cropped brown hair and twinkling indigo eyes.
Although he gives the impression of being an introvert, not really sociable and friendly, in fact, he is an outgoing, confident and generous person. For instance, In spite of being very busy about 12 hours per day, he always responds his students' answers in detail, backs them up. He is a loyal friend for them. By the way, his written in a pedantic hand notes are amazing.
The better I got to know him, the more fascinating Oleg appeared to be. In fact, he's been working for 10 years as electrician, therefore he is good at science. He is also interested in hystory, music, reads a lot, does exercises everyday and knows anatomy better than me, being an artist.
As time passes, I've head over heels for Oleg Shestopal and still have the strongest feelings to him, which, fortunately, are mutual ☺
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It doesn't sound right to say someone was "ordinary" and "rather famous".
In English, if you say you are not interested in someone without additional context, it typically means you are not interested in them from a dating perspective.
Oleg looks as though he's a young man in his 20s.
However, later I found out that he's a 37- year-s old man.
You don't need to repeat his gender here.
He is a well-builedt, has a hooked nose, a cropped brown hair and twinkling indigo eyes.
Although he gives the first impression of being an introvert, not really sociable and friendly, he is in fact, he is an outgoing, confident and generous person.
For instance, Iin spite of being very busy aboutfor 12 hours per day, he always responds to his students' answerquestions in detail, backs them up.
Not sure what you meant by "backs them up".
He is a loyal friend forto them.
You typically wouldn't refer to a teacher as being a "loyal friend".
You might say something like "He is a committed teacher to his students".
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Sept. 21, 2024
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When I first met Shestopal Oleg, who was an ordinary teacher, rather famous between japanese learners of my city, I wasn't quitethat interested.
Oleg looks as though he's a young man in his 20s.
However, I later I found out that he's a 37-year-old man.
(What you said is correct too)
He is a well-builedt, has a hooked nose, a cropped brown hair and twinkling indigo eyes.
Although he initially gives the impression of beingthat he's an introvert, or that he's not really sociable andor friendly, he is in fact, he is an outgoing, confident and generous person.
You could also say, "Although he comes off as an introvert and doesn't seem particularly sociable or friendly at first, he is actually an outgoing, confident and generous person."
I'd probably say it like this.
For instance, In despite of being very busy about 12 hours per day, he always responds to his students' answers in detail, and backs them upup his responses.
He is a loyal friend forto them.
By the way, his written in a pedantic handpedantic, written notes are amazing.
The better I got to know him, the more fascinating Oleg appeared to be.
In fact, he's been working for 10 years as an electrician, and is therefore he is good at science.
"therefore" sounds a little formal in this context though. I might just say, "He's been working as an electrician for 10 years, and so he's quite good at science."
He is also interested in hyistory, and music,. He reads a lot, does exercises everyday, and knows anatomy better than me, being an artist.
As time passes, I've fallen head over heels for Oleg Shestopal and still have the strongest feelings towards him, which, fortunately, are mutual ☺
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Sept. 21, 2024
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In fact, he's been working for 10 years as electrician, therefore he is good at science.
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When I first met Shestopal Oleg, who was an ordinary teacher, rather famous between japanese learners of my city, I wasn't quite interested. When I first met Shestopal Oleg, who was a It doesn't sound right to say someone was "ordinary" and "rather famous". In English, if you say you are not interested in someone without additional context, it typically means you are not interested in them from a dating perspective. When I first met Shestopal Oleg, who was an ordinary teacher, rather famous between japanese learners of my city, I wasn't |
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However, later I found out that he's a 37-year-old man. However, later I found out that he's You don't need to repeat his gender here. However, I later (What you said is correct too) |
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He is a well-builed, has a hooked nose, a cropped brown hair and twinkling indigo eyes. He is He is |
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Although he gives the impression of being an introvert, not really sociable and friendly, in fact, he is an outgoing, confident and generous person. Although he gives the first impression of being an introvert, not really sociable and friendly, he is in fact Although he initially gives the impression You could also say, "Although he comes off as an introvert and doesn't seem particularly sociable or friendly at first, he is actually an outgoing, confident and generous person." I'd probably say it like this. |
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For instance, In spite of being very busy about 12 hours per day, he always responds his students' answers in detail, backs them up. For instance, Not sure what you meant by "backs them up". For instance, |
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He is a loyal friend for them. He is a loyal friend You typically wouldn't refer to a teacher as being a "loyal friend". You might say something like "He is a committed teacher to his students". He is a loyal friend |
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By the way, his written in a pedantic hand notes are amazing.
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As time passes, I've head over heels for Oleg Shestopal and still have the strongest feelings to him, which, fortunately, are mutual ☺ As time passes, I've fallen head over heels for Oleg Shestopal and As time passes, I've fallen head over heels for Oleg Shestopal and still have the strongest feelings towards him, which, fortunately, are mutual ☺ |
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