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Edgut93

Jan. 21, 2022

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Describing myself

I am Eduardo Gutierrez. I just finished college a few months ago and am looking for a job. I consider myself a self-taught, sympathetic, hard-working person. On my free time I enjoy playing video games. Among my favorite ones are Pro Evolution Soccer and Super Mario Double Dash. I also enjoy learning new languages. In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources to do so. I will be writing stuff describing myself more often.

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Describing myself

I am Eduardo Gutierrez.

I just finished college a few months ago and am looking for a job.

I consider myself a self-taught, sympathetic[kind?], hard-working person.

“Sympathetic” is grammatical but if you meant “simpatico” in the sense of “amable” “kind” is much better.

OIn my free time I enjoy playing video games.

Among my favorite ones are Pro Evolution Soccer and Super Mario Double Dash.

Great use of different sentence structure here.

I also enjoy learning new languages.

In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources to do sofor that.

I will be writing stuff describing myself more often.

I consider myself to be a self-taught, sympathetic, and hard-working person.

OIn my free time I enjoy playing video games.

Among my favorite ones are Pro Evolution Soccer and Super Mario Double Dash.

In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources to do so.learn a new language

This is a better more formal way to write this.

I will be writing stuffinformation describing myself more often.

Stuff is very colloquial and ok when you are speaking

Describing myself

I am Eduardo Gutierrez.

I just finished college a few months ago and am looking for a job.

I consider myself a self-taught, sympathetic, and hard-working person.

Ordinarily you wouldn't leave off the "and" (this is called "asyndeton").

OnDuring my free time I enjoy playing video games.

Among my favorite ongames are Pro Evolution Soccer and Super Mario Double Dash.

In general, it's better to avoid using "ones" etc. and opt for something more specific.

I also enjoy learning new languages.

In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources to do so.

I will be writing stuff describing myself in writing more often.

I suggest avoiding the word "stuff"; it's predominately used by children who don't know more precise words.

Describing myself

I am Eduardo Gutierrez.

I just finished college a few months ago and am looking for a job.

I consider myself a self-taught, sympathetic, hard-working person.

OIn my free time I enjoy playing video games.

Among my favorite ones are Pro Evolution Soccer and Super Mario Double Dash.

I also enjoy learning new languages.

In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources to do so.

I will be writing stuff describing myself more often.

Describing myself

I am Eduardo Gutierrez.

I just finished college a few months ago and am looking for a job.

I consider myself a self-taught, sympathetic, hard-working person.

OIn my free time, I enjoy playing video games.

Among my favorite ones are "Pro Evolution Soccer" and "Super Mario Double Dash".

I also enjoy learning new languages.

In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources with which to do so.

I will be writing stuff describing myself more often.

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I am Eduardo Gutierrez.


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I just finished college a few months ago and am looking for a job.


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I consider myself a self-taught, sympathetic, hard-working person.


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I consider myself a self-taught, sympathetic, and hard-working person.

Ordinarily you wouldn't leave off the "and" (this is called "asyndeton").

I consider myself to be a self-taught, sympathetic, and hard-working person.

I consider myself a self-taught, sympathetic[kind?], hard-working person.

“Sympathetic” is grammatical but if you meant “simpatico” in the sense of “amable” “kind” is much better.

On my free time I enjoy playing video games.


OIn my free time, I enjoy playing video games.

OIn my free time I enjoy playing video games.

OnDuring my free time I enjoy playing video games.

OIn my free time I enjoy playing video games.

OIn my free time I enjoy playing video games.

Among my favorite ones are Pro Evolution Soccer and Super Mario Double Dash.


Among my favorite ones are "Pro Evolution Soccer" and "Super Mario Double Dash".

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Among my favorite ongames are Pro Evolution Soccer and Super Mario Double Dash.

In general, it's better to avoid using "ones" etc. and opt for something more specific.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Among my favorite ones are Pro Evolution Soccer and Super Mario Double Dash.

Great use of different sentence structure here.

I also enjoy learning new languages.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources to do so.


In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources with which to do so.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources to do so.learn a new language

This is a better more formal way to write this.

In fact, the Internet has provided me with a lot of resources to do sofor that.

I will be writing stuff describing myself more often.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will be writing stuff describing myself in writing more often.

I suggest avoiding the word "stuff"; it's predominately used by children who don't know more precise words.

I will be writing stuffinformation describing myself more often.

Stuff is very colloquial and ok when you are speaking

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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