June 14, 2021
Describing My House
I live in an apartment, there are 23 floors tall.
There are three bedrooms, one big living room and one kitchen in my apartment.
From the center, the living room is to the south and the kitchen is to the north.
To the left of the living room, there are two bedrooms.
One bedroom is for my three sons whose desks are there.
Another one which is the smallest room was originally for guests, but I usually use it as my restroom.
To the right of the living room, there is a middle side room which is for my wife and me.
There are many books and two computers for us.
If I have a change, I want to move to a bigger apartment, where has four rooms.
Because all of my sons want to have their own rooms.
I hope the day will come soon
Describing My House
I live in an apartment, in which there are 23 floors tall.
There are three bedrooms, one big living room, and onea kitchen in my apartment.
From the centerIf you were to stand in the middle, the living room iswould be to the south and the kitchen is to the north.
To the left of the living room, there are two bedrooms.
One bedroom is for my three sons, whose desks are there.
Another one, which is the smallest room, was originally for guests, but I usually use it as my restroom.
This sentence sounds a little odd. I don't know if you meant it like this, but it sounds like you're saying that you use your smallest bedroom as a restroom, which is another word for bathroom.
To the right of the living room, there is a middle side room in the middle which is for my wife and me.
TIn there are many books and our two computers for us.
If I have acould change, I things, I would want to move to a bigger apartment, where that has four rooms.
Because allthat way, each of my sons want tocould have their own rooms, which they want.
I hope the day will come soon
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June 14, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Describing My House This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I live in an apartment, there are 23 floors tall. I live in an apartment |
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There are three bedrooms, one big living room and one kitchen in my apartment. There are three bedrooms, one big living room, and |
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From the center, the living room is to the south and the kitchen is to the north.
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To the left of the living room, there are two bedrooms. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One bedroom is for my three sons whose desks are there. One bedroom is for my three sons, whose desks are there. |
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Another one which is the smallest room was originally for guests, but I usually use it as my restroom. Another one, which is the smallest room, was originally for guests, but I usually use it as my restroom. This sentence sounds a little odd. I don't know if you meant it like this, but it sounds like you're saying that you use your smallest bedroom as a restroom, which is another word for bathroom. |
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To the right of the living room, there is a middle side room which is for my wife and me. To the right of the living room, there is a |
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There are many books and two computers for us.
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If I have a change, I want to move to a bigger apartment, where has four rooms. If I |
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Because all of my sons want to have their own rooms. Because |
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I hope the day will come soon This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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