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Sept. 22, 2021

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The diagram illustrates the mechanism of generating electricity with water. In total, this process includes three different stages. While the water of a sea evaporates, clouds start to formate. After it starts to rain, the water will fill a specific reservoir which is build with a dam that collects the water over a certain area. For the second stage, this water is connected to two other buildings. When the valve opens, the water starts to circle between these three buildings and constructions. The flowing water turns on the Turbine, which generates the eletricity with high voltage cables. After that, the water flows to the third building where the Pump pumps the water up to the Reservior again. The last step is about to transport the electricity with high voltage cables to a transformer station. From that point, the electricity will be distributed between different buildings by underground cables. For example, these buildings could be hospitals, schools or other places that are connected with these undergroud cables.

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Whilen the water of a sea evaporates, clouds start to formate.

"While" works too, but "when" is more natural.

After it starts to rain, the water will fillthin a specific areservoir which is build with a dam that collects the water over a certain area.a flows into a resevoir formed via a dam.

When the valve opens, the water starts to circle between these three buildings and constructions.facilities

The flowing water turns ondrives the Tturbine, which generates the electricity witand transmits it through high voltage cables.

After that, the water flows to the third building where the Ppump pumps the water up to the Rreservioir again.

TIn the last step is about, electricity is transported to a transpfort the electricity with high voltage cables to a transformer stationmer station through high voltage cables.

Describing an illustration


The diagram illustrates the mechanism of generating electricity with water.


In total, this process includes three different stages.


While the water of a sea evaporates, clouds start to formate.


Whilen the water of a sea evaporates, clouds start to formate.

"While" works too, but "when" is more natural.

After it starts to rain, the water will fill a specific reservoir which is build with a dam that collects the water over a certain area.


After it starts to rain, the water will fillthin a specific areservoir which is build with a dam that collects the water over a certain area.a flows into a resevoir formed via a dam.

For the second stage, this water is connected to two other buildings.


When the valve opens, the water starts to circle between these three buildings and constructions.


When the valve opens, the water starts to circle between these three buildings and constructions.facilities

The flowing water turns on the Turbine, which generates the eletricity with high voltage cables.


The flowing water turns ondrives the Tturbine, which generates the electricity witand transmits it through high voltage cables.

After that, the water flows to the third building where the Pump pumps the water up to the Reservior again.


After that, the water flows to the third building where the Ppump pumps the water up to the Rreservioir again.

The last step is about to transport the electricity with high voltage cables to a transformer station.


TIn the last step is about, electricity is transported to a transpfort the electricity with high voltage cables to a transformer stationmer station through high voltage cables.

From that point, the electricity will be distributed between different buildings by underground cables.


For example, these buildings could be hospitals, schools or other places that are connected with these undergroud cables.


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