May 21, 2023
Describing a picture
In this picture there is a group of people walking in the forest. They are carrying bags with water and different equipment, so they are probably going camping. They are following a path that is next to the train rails. There’s a yellow train coming from the direction the group is heading to.
They are following a path that is next to the train trailcks.
Train rails isn't necessarily wrong, just tracks sounds better.
There’s a yellow train coming from the direction the group is heading to.
Nothing wrong, just thought i would mention that in formal language, we would not contract the word. So "there is" rather than "there's. But this works perfectly fine for informal speech.
Describing a picture
In this picture, there isare a group of people walking in the forest.
"there are" makes more sense here, as you are emphasising the people in the picture.
They are carrying bags with water and different types of equipment, so they are probably going camping.
"different equipment" makes sense, but I think "different types of equipment" sounds better
They are following a path that is next to thsome train trailcks.
"train tracks" is used more than "train rails" i think, especially in England. Use "some" because the train tracks are not specific (ex: "A path that is next to the [Name of Train Station]'s train tracks.")
There’s a yellow train coming from the direction the group is heading to.
They are carrying bags with water and differentvarious equipment, so they are probably going camping.
There is no problem with using 'different' here, but various sounds more fitting.
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No important fault for this paragraph, great writing.
Describing a picture
In this picture, there isare a group of people walking in the forest.
I changed "there is" to "there are" because the noun (in this example, the group of people) is plural so it becomes "there are".
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Good work!
June 8, 2023
In this picture, there isare a group of people walking in the forest.
There is a bit more nuance to this one. You can use either "there is" or "there are" because the "a group" is singular even though the contents (people) are plural. Therefore choose whether you want to emphasise the group or the people.
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In this picture there is a group of people walking in the forest. In this picture, there I changed "there is" to "there are" because the noun (in this example, the group of people) is plural so it becomes "there are". In this picture, there "there are" makes more sense here, as you are emphasising the people in the picture. |
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They are carrying bags with water and different equipment, so they are probably going camping. They are carrying bags with water and There is no problem with using 'different' here, but various sounds more fitting. They are carrying bags with water and different types of equipment, so they are probably going camping. "different equipment" makes sense, but I think "different types of equipment" sounds better |
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They are following a path that is next to the train rails. They are following a path that is next to "train tracks" is used more than "train rails" i think, especially in England. Use "some" because the train tracks are not specific (ex: "A path that is next to the [Name of Train Station]'s train tracks.") They are following a path that is next to the train tra Train rails isn't necessarily wrong, just tracks sounds better. |
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There’s a yellow train coming from the direction the group is heading to. This sentence has been marked as perfect! There’s a yellow train coming from the direction the group is heading to. Nothing wrong, just thought i would mention that in formal language, we would not contract the word. So "there is" rather than "there's. But this works perfectly fine for informal speech. |
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