April 28, 2022
Describe Your room and favorite place in your home
My current room is actually like a prince's room but a smaller version. I use it to sleep and study as well. It is painted in pale blue. It has a bed, bookshelves and a desk. It’s not really spacious but I'm crazy about it. However, I can design my place layout to suit myself. I also have a separate bathroom for myself.
I prefer my bedroom most due to its convenience and privacy. I want to be in a quiet place and never disturbed by anyone else.
My second favorite place in my home is definitely the kitchen. Not only launch and dinner time but also all of my family reunions take place there. Moreover, the kitchen is fully equipped with all mod con.
I have been living there ever since I was born, which is 23 years so far, that is a relatively long period of time, so I’m really attached to this quiet house. I hate house-hunting because moving into another house is too exhausting.
Both my parents think that moving to a new place is time-consuming. Although my mom thinks that cleaning and rearranging would be like torture for herself, She doesn't mind new decorations.
Describe Yyour room and favorite place in your home
In titles, capitalize all significant words or only the first one.
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While the first part of the sentence is not incorrect, this way is more common and flows better.
It makes more sense to put 'My' instead of 'Our' because this has been talking primarily about you and your thoughts.
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I have been living there ever since I was born, which is 23 years so far, i. That is a relatively long period of time, so I’m really attached to this quiet, tranquil house.
Try to avoid having many commas in a sentence, it's good to split it up often.
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Although it is phrased awkwardly, the meaning is clear and I could understand it easily. Good job!
April 29, 2022
Thanks A lot for your useful tips and your corrections
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Describe Your room and favorite place in your home Describe In titles, capitalize all significant words or only the first one. |
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My current room is actually like her prince but a small one. My current room is actually like |
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I use it to sleep and study. |
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It was painted in white. It |
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It has a bed, bookshelves, a canvas, and a desk. |
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It’s not really spacious but I'm crazy about it. |
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However, I can design my place layout to suit myself.
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Moreover, it had an unobstructed view. Moreover, it ha |
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I already have a separate bathroom for myself. I al |
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I prefer my bedroom most due to its convenience and privacy. |
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Thus I want to be in a quiet place and never distributed but anyone else.
Distributed = To give something out Disturbed = To be bothered It is unclear what 'Thus' is referring to in this sentence and it does not seem necessary. |
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The second place I love in our house is definitely the kitchen.
While the first part of the sentence is not incorrect, this way is more common and flows better. It makes more sense to put 'My' instead of 'Our' because this has been talking primarily about you and your thoughts. |
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Not only launch or dinner time but also all of her family reunions is it. Not only l |
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I have been living there ever since I was born, which is 23 years so far, it is a relatively long period of time, so I’m really attached to this quiet, tranquil house. I have been living there ever since I was born, which is 23 years so far Try to avoid having many commas in a sentence, it's good to split it up often. |
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My current room is actually like a prince's room but a smaller version. |
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I use it to sleep and study as well. |
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It is painted in pale blue. |
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It has a bed, bookshelves and a desk. |
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I also have a separate bathroom for myself. |
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I want to be in a quiet place and never disturbed by anyone else. |
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My second favorite place in my home is definitely the kitchen. |
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Not only launch and dinner time but also all of my family reunions take place there. |
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Moreover, the kitchen is fully equipped with all mod con. |
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I have been living there ever since I was born, which is 23 years so far, that is a relatively long period of time, so I’m really attached to this quiet house. |
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I hate house-hunting because moving into another house is too exhausting. |
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Both my parents think that moving to a new place is time-consuming. |
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Although my mom thinks that cleaning and rearranging would be like torture for herself, She doesn't mind new decorations. |
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