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olgadeniskova

April 20, 2021

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Describe the room

Say what you have (or have not) in your flat (with world from textbook).

I have a nice but very small flat. It square is only 14 meters square meters includes kitchen and bathroom but I like it. In "kitchen zone" of my flate I have a cooker, a fridge and a sink. Also I have a table which at the same time - kitchen table, work table and ex. Near the table I have two plastick chair. On the table I also have a TV but the problem is that I very rare see it, when I attune wi-fi the TV is unusefull thing:)
Opposite the table is a sofa which is my bed at the same time. It is not very comfortable because it is to soft which is not good for my back. It is a window with big dense curtains between the sofa and the table. A wardrobe stand near the window. I like it because it is enough big for all my clothes.
I understand that my room is small but is have everything which I need for comfortable life and I like it.

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Describe theyour room

I have a nice but very small flat.

It square is only 14 meters square meters and includes a kitchen and bathroom but I like it.

In my "kitchen zone" of my flatearea" I have a cooker, a fridge and a sink.

In my kitchen, I have...

Is also an alternative

Also I have a kitchen table which at the same time - kitchen table,I also use as a work table and ex, etc.

Near the table I have two plastick chairs.

We can add an "S" to make it plural. Chairs - more than 1

On the table I also have a TV but the problem is that I very rare ly usee it, when I attune. Without wi-fi the TV is unusefull thing:)less.

Opposite of the table there is a sofa which is also my bed at the same time.

It is not very comfortable because it is to soft which is not good for my back.

ItThere is a window with big dense curtains between the sofa and the table.

You can also say thick curtains

A wardrobe stand near the window.

I like it because it is big enough big for all my clothes.

I understand that my room is small but ist haves everything whichthat I need forto live comfortable lifey, and I like it.

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Really nice work! I was able to understand what you've wanted to say. There was only some small mistakes in grammar, etc. With more writing practice, you'll get the hang of it :D

Your place might sound small, but from your description it also sounds homey.

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olgadeniskova

April 21, 2021

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Thank your so much for your help! Yes, the flat is to small but for 1 person it okay)

I like it because it is enough big for all my clothes.


I like it because it is big enough big for all my clothes.

Describe the room


Describe theyour room

Say what you have (or have not) in your flat (with world from textbook).


I have a nice but very small flat.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It square is only 14 meters square meters includes kitchen and bathroom but I like it.


It square is only 14 meters square meters and includes a kitchen and bathroom but I like it.

In "kitchen zone" of my flate I have a cooker, a fridge and a sink.


In my "kitchen zone" of my flatearea" I have a cooker, a fridge and a sink.

In my kitchen, I have... Is also an alternative

Also I have a table which at the same time - kitchen table, work table and ex.


Also I have a kitchen table which at the same time - kitchen table,I also use as a work table and ex, etc.

Near the table I have two plastick chair.


Near the table I have two plastick chairs.

We can add an "S" to make it plural. Chairs - more than 1

On the table I also have a TV but the problem is that I very rare see it, when I attune wi-fi the TV is unusefull thing:)


On the table I also have a TV but the problem is that I very rare ly usee it, when I attune. Without wi-fi the TV is unusefull thing:)less.

Opposite the table is a sofa which is my bed at the same time.


Opposite of the table there is a sofa which is also my bed at the same time.

It is not very comfortable because it is to soft which is not good for my back.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is a window with big dense curtains between the sofa and the table.


ItThere is a window with big dense curtains between the sofa and the table.

You can also say thick curtains

A wardrobe stand near the window.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I understand that my room is small but is have everything which I need for comfortable life and I like it.


I understand that my room is small but ist haves everything whichthat I need forto live comfortable lifey, and I like it.

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