July 4, 2023
A sport that I really enjoy watching is football. In the past few decades, the sport has become more and more popular in my country, thanks to the development of technology that people can watch the World Cup on TV. Although most communities do not have a proper football fields, which needs a lot of space, people are still crazy football fans. The first time I watched a football match was at the World Cup held by South Africa 13 years ago. During that period of time, social media was full of information about the biggest football event, especially when predictions about the results of matches made by a magical squid turned out to be correct again and again, people went crazy. All of those made me have to go and see what was going on. I had never seen any football game before, I began to try to understand the rules of the game, also follow those handsome star players on instagram.
During last year's World Cup in Qatar, my Moroccan friends and I watched all the matches that the Moroccan team were involved, because the Chinese team was not qualified. Most of my friends are fans of Messi and the Argentine team, but I think Argentina has been one of the most competitive teams that there is no surprise to expect them to win, whilst Morocco, to be honest, is relatively weak, but they are real dark horses. It was excited to see them overcame strong teams step by step and finally finished fourth, achieving their best record in history. My Moroccan friend told me that these Muslim players were real warriors, they follow fasting during Ramadan, which means they can't eat or drink during the daylight, but they completed all their training and matches. Football is such an exciting game, full of competition and nobody can predict the result until the final whistle. It's a great sport.
A sport that I really enjoy watching is football.
In the past few decades, the sport has become more and more popular in my country, thanks to the development of technology that means people can watch the World Cup on TV.
Although most communities do not have a proper football fields, which needs a lot of space, people are still crazy football fans.
The first time I watched a football match was atduring the World Cup held by South Africa 13 years ago.
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All of thoseis made me have to go andwant to see what was going on.
I had never seen any football games before, so I began to try to understand the rules of the game, and also followed those handsome star players on iInstagram.
During last year's World Cup in Qatar, my Moroccan friends and I watched all the matches that the Moroccan team were involvplayed, because the Chinese team was not qualified.
Most of my friends are fans of Messi and the Argentine team, but I think Argentina has been one of the most competitive teams thatso there is no surprise to expect them toif they win, whilst Morocco, to be honest, is relatively weak, but they are real dark horses.
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It was exciteding to see them overcaome strong teams step by step and finally finished fourth, achieving their best record in history.
My Moroccan friend told me that these Muslim players were real warriors, they follow fasting during Ramadan, which means they can't eat or drink during the daylight, but they completed all their training and matches.
Football is such an exciting game, full of competition, and nobody can predict the result until the final whistle.
It's a great sport.
A sport that I really enjoy watching is football.
In the past few decades, the sport has become more and more popular in my country, thanks to the development of technology that people can watch the World Cup on TV.
Although most communities do not have a proper football fields, which needs a lot of space, people are still crazy football fans.
The first time I watched a football match was at the World Cup held by South Africa 13 years ago.
During that period of time, social media was full of information about the biggest football event, especially when predictions about the results of matches made by a magical squid turned out to be correct again and again, p. People went crazy.
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It was excited to see them overcaome strong teams step by step and finally finished fourth, achieving their best record in history.
My Moroccan friend told me that these Muslim players were real warriors, t. They follow fasting during Ramadan, which means they can't eat or drink during the daylight, but they completed all their training and matches.
Football is such an exciting game, full of competition, and nobody can predict the result until the final whistle.
It's a great sport.
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Although most communities do not have a proper football fields, which needs a lot of space, people are still crazy football fans.
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I had never seen any football game before, so I began to try to understand the rules of the game, and also follow those handsome star players on iInstagram.
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It was exciteding to see them overcaome strong teams step by step and finally finished fourth, achieving their best record in history.
My Moroccan friend told me that these Muslim players were real warriors, t. They follow fasting during Ramadan, which means they caouldn't eat or drink during the daylight, but they still completed all their training and matches.
Football is such an exciting game, full of competition, and nobody can predict the result until the final whistle.
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Football is such an exciting game, full of competition and nobody can predict the result until the final whistle. Football is such an exciting game, full of competition, and nobody can predict the result until the final whistle. Football is such an exciting game, full of competition, and nobody can predict the result until the final whistle. Football is such an exciting game, full of competition, and nobody can predict the result until the final whistle. |
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